| "Kagome's life" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 00:52 CST
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i would love to be ya beta but i suck at my grammer lol XP but i cant tell apart from Inuyasha's n Kikyo's thought.... just think that i will always be here to comment :D
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 20:51 CST
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YAY ME YAY ME!! I get to be a beta!! Yippy!! eye luv u!! lol. Do u want me to go ahead and fix ur previous chapters? E-mail me at: JamminChick93613@yahoo.com or AARLover93@yahoo.com
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 15:18 CST
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THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!! lol. I love it. I would like to be ur beta if u want me to that is. I like the thought thing but Kikyo and InuYasha's are too similar and it's hard to tell orange from red. Maybe u could try usin neon orange and dark red? It might be better. Well if u wanna contact me e-mail me at: JamminChick93613@yahoo.com or AARLover93@yahoo.com !! Bye 4 now!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
right i have to get this off my chest and i know some1 will bit my head off for it but...... my stoumch has been turning ever since i heard that InuyashaXKagura its >_< but im sure ill get used to it like i did with SesshyXKags but yea im still LOVING ya story ^-^ kept it up seen that your my only author that likes update nearly every day!! so i THANK YOU!!! ^-^
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 12:34 CST
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Wow. Another one! lol. I love this! Update Soon.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 14:09 CST
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Wow, everytime I review there's another chapter I haven't read.. lol. I love it. Update soon like I know u will.. lol
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love THIS ALOT!!! Stupid Sess always bein an ass. Gosh y can't he ever be nice 4 once? lol. I RELE LOVE IT THOUGH SO UPDAT SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 01:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
STILL LOVING THIS STORY!!!!! but Sesshy n Kagome are over or not....... but this is sooooo good ^-^ n dont worry i understand high school really sucks here aswell >_< from ya #1 fan
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Reviewed By: coldheartedvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 21:52 CST
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Please continue , its very good.Here and there you put the wrong words or didn't put a word or two.I would suggest re-reading it when you finish a chapter to prevent that.Also please make them a little longer.Otherwise it's a good stroy line and is writen well.My compliments.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Sun On: February 26, 2007 22:02 CST
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I love your fic, is different. Congratulations
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww i screamed when u said updating for me *giggles..... jumps up n runs in a circle* love it!!!! ^^ i hope u keep updating for me ^^ cant eait to see how this is going to end XD im starting to LOVE sesshy/kagome ^-^ aww its sooo cute from #1 fan!!
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Reviewed By: ThirdDemonKags [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 23:57 CST
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you may consider putting it into better grammer and spacing out the convo's more....i am not guna say my story is the best but go there and you'll see what i mean...its called A Little Thing Called LOVE!! by ThirdDemonKags anyway i like the plot!!!
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 16:13 CST
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Everything goes sooo fast... I mean WTF!!! It's good though so Update soon
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Reviewed By: naracrazy2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 06:44 CST
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I love this story! The chapters could be a little longer, though. Some people don't review because they don't always know what to say. They want to put in some constructive criticism, but they don't want it to seem insulting. Anyway, I love it! Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
am i the only 1 who is reviewing?? all well i dont care if the lemon part was shit but it was good ^^ i really like this story n awwww i would LOVE to be in Sesshy's arms >_< lol but please dont put Inuyasha and Kikyo together.... what ever you do please dont.... from ya #1 fan :D
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