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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2009 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story!!! i think all the deaths of the men kagome was about to marry have something to do with this "father" guy but i wonder who he is please update soon, this is really good
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, thank you for sticking with this story. I'm enjoying it! I am very sorry for your loss.
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Title: family ties
Reviewed By: blondefox910 On: September 08, 2008 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story that you wrote im sorry that you lost your friends and a preson of your family i too lost a good friend but i keep her in my heart you should do the same. If you need a friend to talk to i would like to be your friend ok
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 02:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry for your loss. I am glad that you are able to write again.
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Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 12:23 CDT
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the chapter was perfect and i agree with madmiko, don't rush yourself we all understand. most of us if not all have lost people and know it takes time.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 10:57 CDT
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I'm glad she told Hiei and the others about the man she had loved. It's always better to get that stuff out in the open so everyone isn't taken by surprise later. ^_^ And I liked how supportive Hiei is of her. I'm sorry to hear about your losses. I recently lost several dear ones, and it just takes time to adjust to life without them. Don't rush or push yourself. Give yourself time to grieve.
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Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 01:35 CDT
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my condolences... i hope your life gets better and i hope you will be ok... i'm sorry for your loss
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 08:45 CDT
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this is a great story, i cant wait to find out who the mystery man is
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 20:35 CST
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Nice look into Kag's life in the 20s. And her reunion with Inuyasha was pretty good, too. So, he's mated? To Kikyou or someone else? It was really a sweet moment when he apologized to her. He was right, though, he should have done it a LONG time ago. And what a shocker about Sess cheating on her right before their wedding! That DOG! LOL! I'm looking forward to Inuyasha meeting Hiei, -- can't wait to see what he thinks of him. Well, can't wait to see what Hiei thinks of HIM, either. Interesting way to have some notes delivered. LOL! There's a lot to look forward to coming up! What's in the notes? And Sess' homecoming. Will he resume trying to woo Kagome? How will Hiei react? Thanks for the quick update!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 22:50 CST
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Nice chapter! I like the idea of you showing scenes from the past the way you did at the beginning of this chapter. You really highlighted her responsibilites and her maturity and attention to her duty, as well as her generous and compassionate nature regarding the food situation during the droughts. Those paragraphs were very well written. I also liked the small interaction between her and Hiei. The time difference between the realms is interesting. I'm looking forward to Sesshoumaru's return and all that's coming!
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Reviewed By: pheonixstar On: August 02, 2007 19:16 CDT
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that a really good story and I think Hiei should soo get Kagome. I think thier perfect together. Hiei is dark and Kagome is light.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 04:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry to here that your gradmother has past away . I hope that you are doing well . I know that you do not know me but I do know what it is liek to loose a grandparent. I do hope you are doing well. I am glad that you are writing again and I just want you to know that I think you write beautifully. Lara aka HeartStar
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Reviewed By: madmiko,notsignedin On: July 27, 2007 23:44 CDT
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Nice to see a new chapter for this one! Interesting look into her past through her dream, though her thoughts were a little confusing. Being haunted in her dreams of a past she couldn't have -- I'm not at all sure what that means. It's a bit unclear. And her thoughts about people dying were rather confusing, too. She started out with "I'm going to die before him," and ended up with not wanting to have to see him die before her, along with their children. So, which is it? (Of course, any of them could be killed, so no one is guaranteed living their whole life with their spouse/mate, anyway.) And was the whole thing about her and Hiei, or someone else? And I forget, is she supposed to be immortal? Are demons NOT? Why would her children not be? Did I miss some important information somewhere? So, how long was she ruling as the Lady of the West with Sesshoumaru before he disappeared? And what prompted her thoughts of disappearing/faking her own death just 15 years later? Um, and why would Sess' guards say their Lady had died, -- surely Sesshoumaru would have informed his guards about the important guest he was expecting. And, why in the world would she wait until she was standing in an ALLEY to change into her formal kimono? LOL!! That just seemed bizarre. Why not just put it on at home before she left? Hmmm. And she seems to be stepping WAY back from her feelings for Hiei now. She LIKES him? What happened to him being the only male she ever thought of as her alpha? They sounded a LOT more established and committed a couple of chapters ago. What was the purpose of Yura meeting her there? Just to see her? You've set the stage for a lot of intrigue coming up. Whew! I had a lot of questions after this chapter. I probably need to refresh my memory on this plotline. I liked Kagome's thoughts while she cut her hair. That was really well-done. I'm glad you are writing again!
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Reviewed By: SeleneoftheMoon On: June 10, 2007 12:50 CDT
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I'm sooooooo sorry about your grandmothers death but i also hope that u cont. to do the tings that u love to do (i'm gessing u love to wright (sp?))
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Reviewed By: ldychaos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 07:29 CDT
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I'm sorry to hear about your grandmother. Then again you will probably hear that till your feed up with hearing it from friends and family. I know how you feel, I lost my father one year ago this coming monday, and I lost my grandmother this last March. It will take time for you to get back into the swing of things, just keep in mind to take your time. Don't rush into anything and try not to cut yourself off from the outside world. You may not write for a long time, I know I'm still having trouble writting. Just know that your readers will wait for you. Give yourself time to grieve. If you ever need someone to listen, you can always contact me. Ldy Chaos.
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