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| "Family ties" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Reviewed By: Exaltation [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about writing!! I'm very sorry about your grandmother!! I hope you begin to feel better!! She is in a better place as many put it!! But don't worry you will see her!! =) Feel loads better!!! Emy
| Reviewed By: phantomphan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 19:23 CDT
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sorry to hear that hope you will feel better about what happen soon.
| Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon XD
| Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 16:26 CDT
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Great work! I really loved it. Keep up the great work and update asap please. :) :D
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 01:55 CDT
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Interesting. How in the world did Rena get Youko OUT of Kurama? He doesn't have a body, then, does he? All of the mother/father talk is very cryptic and mysterious. I would think Kurama would be a little suspicious of Shiori's behavior since it seems like such a turnaround. And she's got him running errands for her? What is he -- a delivery boy? LOL!! Oh, how the mighty have fallen to be so clueless. And he isn't getting concerned yet about Youko's absence? Hoo boy! Um, how can someone else place a claim on her if Kurama's claim came back when she chose Hiei? Wouldn't that just happen with anyone else, too? At least Hiei knows something is going on with Youko, so he can question Kurama. And he'll be on the alert to keep an eye on him and Kagome. You know, this fic is turning out to be QUITE different than I had imagined from the first few chapters. I'll be interested to see what happens at Sesshoumaru's. (Oh, and I had to laugh at the idea of a 500-year-old woman, who used to rule Japan, listening to Hoobastank and writing a blog on myspace. I would think she would want to keep a low profile. Heh heh!)
| Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update soon....
| Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 22:41 CDT
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i knew sumthing was up w/ shiori... hmm and kagome jus suddenly 4got stuff that happened seems to be interesing looking forward to wuts coming up next
| Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello, i think this is the first time I've reviewed this story... But I noticed that the girl thats with Kurama, is she that little Bat Honyou from the inuyasha series, because it would make sense.. and is the villain that Greg guy....Well please update soon... wonderful story by the way.. I just love Hiei/Kagome pairings.... Sincerely, loveinuyasha911 ღღღღღღღღღღư 6;ღღ :) ღღღღღღღღღღư 6;ღღ
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 01:41 CDT
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Interesting little chapter there. Seems like Kurama should be a little more cautious around Shiori -- yes, she's just a little bit too much like Kagome, and he fell a little too fast. I was feeling really sorry for him until he instantly changed tracks. So fickle. LOL!! Interesting little spell she has him under. And poor Youko has been sedated or something to that effect. Um, just HOW exactly did Shiori explain knowing what Kurama is, unless she is a miko or youkai herself? Seriously, was everyone's sixth sense out to lunch? LOL!! I hope you'll spend a little more time with Hiei and Kag's relationship. (Yep. I'm talking the good stuff. They've only been lovers for 2 or 3 days and already they're just going to bed to go to sleep? What's up with that? LOL!!) It was interesting the way you said Kurama sensed his claim coming back to him. Nice, the way Kagome told Hiei about her past love. Of course, he was going to be accepting of it -- why not? Nice mysterious touch with the "mother" , "father" bit. I'll look forward to your next chapter.
| Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, update soon!!!
| Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 16:01 CDT
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I really loved it. Great work! Keep it up and update asap please.
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 02:58 CDT
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Well, that was great! First the teaser, dashing all of our hopes, and then the payoff anyway -- nice! Tastefully written, too. And the dreadful foreshadowing at the end. Hmmm. What events are about to take place and how will it affect them? They're together, but not in any kind of formal, committed way. What will happen when they get home? There's going to be one unhappy fox there, isn't there? Ha! Loved their thoughts about who the Alpha is, and nice that they agreed -- that could have caused some problems, otherwise, eh? And he's the only one she's ever considered her Alpha, huh? That says a lot. I think this is an awesome set-up for future events. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter!
| Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 19:00 CDT
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*mummbles to self* I will not cry.... I will not cry... * Two out of Thee Aint Bad by Meatloaf comes on*.... I will n-n-n-not... *breaks down and cries my eyes out like a little baby* I can't help it... i really like Hiei and Kagome pairings... I really like Kagome and Kurama pairings... I REALLY like Kurama/Kagome/Hiei pairings... but.... deep down in my heart I'm a Sesshomaru/Kagome fangirl and.... this.... my heart is broken.... in a good way... but stilll broken.... *sniffles, somehow that making me cry harder*
| Title: please!!!
Reviewed By: gibsonharlot [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really like this fanfiction! please update it as soon as possible.. i really hope you make that mysterous guy the bad guy in the story. we need some fighting for kagome's safety...lol keep up the good work! ~kate
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 15:21 CST
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This is being written after chapter 2, so I don't know what else is in the later chapters. I love crossovers, especially ones like this which bring many of the Inuyasha characters into it, and not just Kagome. Your writing style is good also. However, I'm having some problems with Kagome. She pulls me out of the universe you are creating. She is behaving more like a 20 year old and not a 520 year old. While basic personality wouldn't change, your character is a woman (not a girl.) She ruled Japan for 250 - 300 years and then hand picked and trained her successor. The same person who did that would not grab her cds and stereo, giggle and say, 'you stay put, Yuusie, I'm going to teach you all.' It also seems childish of her to be laughing herself silly over poor Hiei's instant jealousy. Think of the characters from Highlander. Some of them were upbeat, happy go lucky, etc., but they all had an underlying maturity to their nature that would be instilled in a person who was 500 years old, especially a ruler. That said, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the fic, and just hope that Kagome's character settles down a bit. I commend you on the fact that you update quickly, and not every few months.
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