| "Yakunan Rijun" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Title: Aw!
Reviewed By: Charon the IT'S SHORT Sabercat On: November 26, 2007 00:27 CST
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Oh well. Short but forwarding! TO BATTLE! (rush on)
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Title: YES-ness
Reviewed By: RW (not logged in~ ;D) On: November 10, 2007 07:46 CST
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First, two typos that sorta (annoyed) me-- you kep typing Alas instead of Alias, and it's not Bakunetsumaru-domo. Domo is that fuzzy brown character from a Japanese tv show with the RAWR face. You mean DONO, lord. :3 --AND as far as the rest of it goes- W00T! This fic is really snowballing now man! O.o Heehee Araebisu and Kouheimaru... >:] Nice job. (I'm not sure if I mentioned this, but Araebisu doesn't carry an antidote for his poison- but it wouldn't be so troublesome to make an antidote... providing you have a sample of the poison) Nyar, keep it up girl! Fight college! FIGHT!
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Title: Dawei! Melissa!
Reviewed By: Charon the FINALLLY Sabercat On: November 09, 2007 22:59 CST
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The CALM before the BIG OL' HURRICANE that gonna squish everything and cause mold! (Tee hee!) This is gonna rock, shi! Later!
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 21:33 CST
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Yes! An update! Mediaminer's been dead for awhile too. XP Awesome new chapter! I love how we get to see old-er-new (Oh dear, this is gonna get confusing XDDD) faces in the future (Especially seeing Madnug). Azural sounds cool in her adult form. And the Baku's meeting each other was pretty funny. Oooo, I sense a big battle coming. Can't wait for the next update!!
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy On: November 09, 2007 20:13 CST
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Yay! You updated! It's been MONTHS! And that's funny how you've made a Zakobusshi Hour. I wonder what happened to the ZZH hosts in teh future.
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 11:24 CDT
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*stupid review cut off --- anyway, watch for the typos- especially the part with Celestin saying he isn't a hero. Great job, and update whenever you get a chance from school! I'll put my pestering off for a while, heehee. ^^;
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 11:22 CDT
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Wheee! >__< I can't wait to see how Baku of the future will react to all of this! O_o; Hahaha! I bet the discontinuity is because of them leaving to the future from the present.
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: Charon the FREAKIN' EXCITED Sabercat On: September 05, 2007 21:53 CDT
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(To the tune of Camptown Races) Yay yay yay yay yay yay yay! So glad! So glad! Cel-es-tin-is-way-emo! Demons-gon-na die! I can't wait to see more! (skips away happily)
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 18:12 CDT
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Okay, okay. So now they're in the future...I wonder who they'll meet.
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 17:32 CDT
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Ahhh, so they go to the future! I saw that coming. XDDD Awesomeness! Aw, the look on the future GF's faces when they see the younger GF...That'll be amusing. XP Nice chapter FFD! Short, but sweet as well. Poor Celestin...It's not over yet! ^_^
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
And the fic is starting to come together! Demon General as the Angel of Death? I knew it, hah! *pumps fists in the air* Very awesome battle scenes, and poor Zero with the in-laws. *shakes head* Poor all of them for getting sucked out of the time stream! Haha, loved the 'Celestin, quit being emo' line. XP Awesome chapters! Looking forward to more!
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Title: >__
Reviewed By: Sayla On: August 13, 2007 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Zero has evil in-laws... Anyhoo, I KNEW the Angel of Death was D.G.! Oshi, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 17:42 CDT
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OOh! Demon General is the Angel of Death!? I didn't see that coming! How'd it happen? And poor Zero, getting run through the wringer by Fleur's relatives... Poor kid, at weddings, the only enemies are the in-laws. By the way, I thought up a character for you, but it's not a bad guy per se, so E-mail me if you want it...or her.
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Reviewed By: RW On: August 13, 2007 13:09 CDT
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Oh yeah, Nick and Nack are hilarious. Btw. :B
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Reviewed By: RW (:B not logged in) On: August 13, 2007 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
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:D The spelling and grammar errors are worse than they've ever been in this chapter, Fenn, most of them within the first 10 sentences of the chapter. Very interesting! Are they REALLY in the right time? But then what are going to do with the Demon General taken? D: Well, doing good, update asap! :333
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