| "Yakunan Rijun" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: March 09, 2007 12:36 CST
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Aww, the old guys don't trust Gio. which is understandable, to be sure. There is something mighty odd about him...but I degress. Not a bad chapter. You have permission to use Master Haomaru and Genko from my fic, if you want.
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Title: Oooh...
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 08:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Zero and Fleur had a kid? Cool.
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Title: THERE it is
Reviewed By: Charon the Sabercat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 07:54 CST
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I see it now. Gio's from the future, he has a laugh like Zero's, knows ALL about the Gundam Force... but I digress. I might just be a presumptuous know-it-all. And there's still a matter of the little clues about Gio that pop up out of "nowhere". Ambidextrous, plasma rifle? Anyway, awesome. I'll have as much fun decoding this fanfiction as I do reading it. Later.
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 04:19 CST
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Well, I'm kinda interested in why Britain and Kiba still don't trust him of course... What about this critical thing Rubbish is talking about? Is Zero his dad and he's from the future!? o_- Ahahaha... I said nothing. ^^;;;; Good update!
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Title: *light bulb*
Reviewed By: Sayla On: March 02, 2007 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, I just had a light bulb! The Angel of Death is Deman General, isn't it?
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: March 01, 2007 11:05 CST
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So The Death Angel is after Shute. He must want to put the brakes on the Soul Drive. The ZakoZako Hours could use some work, though. And if you want new characters or story ideas, you know where to put a message. Zako~!
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Title: Ohmygoodness
Reviewed By: Charon the Sabercat (hello!) On: March 01, 2007 10:12 CST
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This chapter was so much FUN to READ! Everything that came out of the character's mouthes was priceless! "You're dead again." "Captain must be his dad..." Awesome! The only problem is your fic is drowning in typos. Did you type this in a rush? Spelling errors aside, it's still awesome. I'm going to be re-reading this A LOT.
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 04:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Hahaha, playfully fun chapter. They never realized they were under attack. :] And hey, you need that sometimes to lighten the mood during serious times, right? I liked it a lot, but this Angel of Death seems interesting. Red eyes... hmm, update soon!
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Title: Sooo cool!!
Reviewed By: Rere-Katare On: March 01, 2007 00:12 CST
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Gio....Didn't you use that name? or was it someone else??? Oh well, It was really good!! I Find it really funny how Shute unknowningly dodges getting kinapped and that Cy guy mistaking that they are powerful for the wrong reason.^_^ I get a strange feeling of where this story is going...hopfully I'm wrong. I can only find out if you update soon, so please keep it up! Good luck with the next chapter!!
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Title: Oooh...
Reviewed By: Sayla On: February 25, 2007 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good so far... Funny scene with sleeping Baku. One question though. Where's King Pheonix, Fluer's little sis (can't remember her name right now), and Lucky?
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: February 21, 2007 09:13 CST
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Good chapter. Now we have a basic Idea of what's happening. A war with the angel of death...is Gio fighting the Grim Reaper? And why does his weapons seem familiar to the Zakos? is his world somewhere the Dark Axis attacked? And what is his big secret? and if you want help, like character ideas, go to the board. And be careful on Zero's dialogue. I've never heard him use the term 'babe' in that context...nor do I think he will.
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Title: Rawr.
Reviewed By: Charon the Sabercat (hello) On: February 21, 2007 07:57 CST
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Gotta be careful how you treat Fleur now, or else the reader's will think you've stuck Zero with a Bridezilla. It's understandable that she'd be upset, but a year away? Anyways, a good story that's fun to read. Keep at it. And I wanna see more of Baku's new love interest.
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 05:36 CST
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Oooh, that was a fast update. :3 Hmm, Gio, makes me think of TDAT-CrytalDragon's fic. XD; Wellll anyway... I would hate to be named Rubbish, hahaha. O.O; Very cute scene with Baku asleep, I loved it! n.n Why was Genki all possessed then? I'm kinda confused, and I wonder... Well, update soon again! :]
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 01:52 CST
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Ohhh, evil return, I like your title. x] Everyone getting drunk, hahaha. Well, wonder who those voices were at any rate. ^_^ Keep going girl
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 08:14 CST
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*laughs at all the mushas getting drunk* Oh gosh, Genkimaru's line is so priceless. XDDD This is already having me begging for more! This is off to a very good start!
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