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Reviewed By: dragoonvixenofshadows(nsi) On: December 12, 2007 21:26 CST
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I like it and it has been a while since you updated...please contenue
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Reviewed By: Patty530 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It had been awhile since I checked up on your wonderful story. Your last chapter surprised me. Pleasantly, I assure you. I'm glad Kurama finally gave in to his desires and upset that he wants to run from Kagome. I hope that they get it figured out soon. :)
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Reviewed By: rain dance [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. take alittle more time if you need it and I can not wait till the new chapters are writen. You have a gift in captering a person with your story.
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Reviewed By: jen9 On: October 22, 2007 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this was a great chapter! and FYI that is a lime, any sexual thing without actual sex is a lime, if they actually have sex then thats a lemon... keep writing! Ja Ne xoxox
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Reviewed By: misfits284 On: October 22, 2007 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes thanks for the update and i can't wait till you update again. you did i very good job on that last chap and i loved it
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Reviewed By: bookworm182 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 20:26 CDT
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youshould totatly finish thi story. Its like freaken addictive...like CHOCOLATE! Its really awsome, you should really finth thi story.
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 10:58 CDT
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You did just fine with the ceremony scene, in my opinion. Stuff like that is always hard to write. I really enjoyed the interaction between Kagome and Kohaku in this chapter--clever girl to make him stop blaming himself!
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Reviewed By: Methos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,great chapter. i liked that the ceremony was short, bit you cover all the important stuff. Can't wait to read the next one soon. Oh, and I think that Sango's pink glowing stomach means that the baby is a Miko maybe??
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha, ha. I don't mind your taking creative license with the two series at all, as long as you keep entertaining me so much. I was just having a chuckle at the bathtime discussion between Kagome and Sango--not to mention Miroku. And the idea of Sesshoumaru as a "tyrannical patriarch" seems to just click. I'm also enjoying Kagome's interactions with Kurama and the dreams--excellent way to jump to the action without putting them way out of character, you know? Gah, I'm just sorry there isn't more to read yet!
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 02:08 CDT
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this is one of the best stories ive read so far! the way they interact woth one another is fabulous.
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Reviewed By: LadyShadowDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 21:19 CDT
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I like how your story is turning out. I can't wait to see how you bring Yusuke and Hiei back into the mix. I also can't wait to see what happens between Kagome and Kurama. Hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: darkmagicuser_92 On: August 29, 2007 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was a great new chapter! I can't wait for your new one...keep them coming! I'm so excited! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 02:35 CDT
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Yay! Yay! Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happends next!
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Reviewed By: cowgirlkitten2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 17:44 CDT
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i loved the reaction. this is a great chapter. u did a wonderful job. i cant wait to read more
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Reviewed By: cowgirlkitten2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 17:44 CDT
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i loved the reaction. this is a great chapter. u did a wonderful job. i cant wait to read more
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