| "Something To Protect" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: March 01, 2007 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like that there's still some conflict between the boys, but there is just so many questions since you basically started in the middle.
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Reviewed By: Angelofdeath2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far? Your style of writing is unique. I cant wait to read more of your story.
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: Kasen_Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! This is good! Please update I look forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 20:11 CST
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this is really good. & interesting. i look forward 2 reading future chapter so update soon!! plz.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 20:43 CST
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This is very interesting and I can't wait to hear what Inuyasha's answer will be. I'm sure that we are in for a big surprise once you decide to let us in on the big secret. Heheh. It is fresh that you begin the fic with Inu already pregnant. Kudo's for you for something that I haven't seen before. Though, that doesn't mean that a similar fic hasn't been written. I do hope that you continue the fic! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: hanna On: February 25, 2007 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very intresting, I wonmder who's child it is!! Naraku? Kouga? A mystery? I wonder! o____o I hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashawifey [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY I HOPE TO FIND OUT WHO THE FATHER IS
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Reviewed By: pretty-crazed-doll [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 05:32 CST
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Thank you all who have reviewed so far. I noticed you all have a lot of questions, don't worry everything gets explained. The question about 'where are the others' will come up in chapter 3. Thank you all again, I love you! PCD xxx
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 21:17 CST
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alright this is a story that i wouldnt never understand lol but im still gunna read but..... why is inuyasha carrying a child!?!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far!! I'm going to add you to my favorite list!! I hope we find out who the father is soon!!! One question thought, in the first chapter when Inuyasha says he isn't planning on having the baby, what did he mean by that?!? It's a stupid question, but I got to know!! Update soon please because I can't wait for more! Keep up the good work!! ^_^
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Title: SoSickOfNyQuil
Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very good and I can't wait to read the next chapter and hopefully find out who's baby Inu is carrying?
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 16:42 CST
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heyo Villow!!!! Like your story, but your sp's are drivin me crazy sweetie! ^.^ Update, I know where you live so i can hunt you down lmao. And while you're at this writin' thing, read some of my fics damn you lol. read my beyblade one you'll like it! -- Shigure-san (Kitten) x
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ouch,w hy is it that the hard questions come first anyway? ANd where the hell is the rest of Inuyasha's group anyway? Interesting question to say the least. Personally, I call Kouga as the father. Anyway, like the story, and it is handled well, though a few minor issues (3rd or 4th to last paragraph in chapter 2, surely is misspelled) but those just need an occasional spellcheck. Anyway, love the story, keep writing.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 23:44 CST
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right im kinda lost >_< what baby......... im soooo freaking lost T-T awww please make it all more sense next chapter for me
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this is interesting to see that Sess has a side of himself that honor will not allow him to disregard so easily. I would like to find out who the father is and why Sess feels the way he does.
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