| "When the Cherry Blossoms Bloom" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 10:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that's definitly a great outburst even for Edward's character, but it was done realistically. The scene with Winry and Edward on the front porch was emotional and showed more depth to Ed's character than I've seen for awhile in this story and I loved it. Roy's realization that Brian's middle name was his was a wonderful moment and one of my favorites in this fic so far. Its the adorable moments like that between Roy and Winry that make me love Roy's character even more and the RoyxWinry pairing even more. Finally, Roy's confession at the end was so sad but beautifully written, and so easy to picture while reading, thanks for the great detail you put into each chapter! Al's character and purpose in this story to see all points of view and (unlike Pinako) actually comment on them to each party. I love how Al can sit and have a serious conversation with Roy while his brother is outside confessing his soul. Its great to have a character who is in it only for Winry's welfare and happiness. I can't wait to see where this goes in the next chapter, yet I know theres a pairing I'd really want to see, again, haha. Thanks! I'll keep an eye open for the next update!
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Title: OMG I CAN'T STAND IT
Reviewed By: Alaskanbeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 11:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God I can barely stand this who will she end up with, (ROY ROY and oh yes ROY) I hope although would love to see Al and Ed find someone to, but Roy and Win they belong together and damn it where is the sex!!!!!!!!! :O). I am so glad I have something to look forward to each day now, looking to see if the next chapter is up. You are WONDERFUL, please never stop writing you truly have a gift for it.
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Title: Amazing, Still Amazing
Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This review is actually for he last three chapters....and I'm just saying that this story is still wonderful to read. Alphonse's character is just what the story needs, a level headed, unbiased opinion when the situation calls for it, yet he doesn't come off as a dr. phil, psychologist type which is good. Roy returning to the story is wonderful and everything (reaction wise) i could have expected. I enjoy the fact that Roy himself seems to have matured a little in his arguments with Edward and just his overall opinion of the Winry situation and how he plans to deal with it. Roy's character is still one that even after all he has been shown to have done to Winry in this fic, as a reader, i can't hate him or even dislike him for that matter, and it is therefore easy to relate to the Winry outlook on Roy and understand how hard it is for her in this. Winry's character is believable, to the point where she has become relatable. For her to be struggling that hard over the fact of whether or not to give Roy a second (or third) chance is something that I expected and hoped she would have to face and Roy's efforts to get to know his children are also bonuses for his character. Brian and Anna seem to have a little plan going on and I can't wait to see what they decide to do in this situation...especially to Edward. And as for Ed, his absolute love for Winry, that came way too late, was saddening at first, but now its so hard to not be on Roy's side in this whole argument and therefore I find myself believing that Ed deserves what he is (or isnt) getting from Winry because of all he has placed on her in previous years. Pinako and Roy's parents are great working together, yet from afar, to try to unite their kids/grandkids once again. I love how Pinako shows up at that greatest times and has those "you'll thank me for this later" lines which are so believeable coming from her. I'll be looking forward to the coming chapters and I thank you for three great ones once again! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 22:25 EDT
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Loving Pinako! She knows Winry better than any of the men! Not a bad reunion considering 5 years+ have passed. Ed must understand, deep down in his heart, that Winry is not his & she and Roy belong together. Thanks for the update! :D
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ go roy go Pinako! i love that old woman. the battle begins with alchemists. the only thing that ed will do though is make winry be alone for the rest of her life if he wins the battle, its sad that he doesn't see that even through all of those trial things. well any way, can't wait for the next update. this is such a great fic! ^_^
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Major Fan of This Story On: June 18, 2007 08:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well typical Roy isn't it, using a threat, but knowing how he is that is cool I can only hope that Winry will take him..I tell you I can hardly stand the wait from day to day to find out what is going on in this story, It is like a slow torture waiting for a brilliant mind to get the next chapter. You just get better and better with each page. I truly hope you never give up writting.
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 00:35 EDT
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YEAH!!!! ROY IS IN THE PICTURE AGAIN!!!! SOOOOO HAPPY!!!! i can't wait for the next chapter. I hope its soon! love this fic!^_^
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 12:44 EDT
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Ooooh! So much in 1 chapter! Winry's heart belongs to & with Roy, no doubt! A nice sweet reunion for the two would be nice, but I don't see that happening right away. Especially with Ed fuming away right there. Ed needs to be the bigger man & use his knowledge of how Roy really feels about Winry, and get these two back together.
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 09:45 EDT
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ooh, yes yes. roy should kiss winry in front of ed! and then, winry kiss back! good idea uoa123! after they've talked, of course
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 09:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh. my. GOD! that was a FANTASTIC chapter! mwahaha, Winry turned from Ed's kiss. Wonderful! =) and. ROY's here!!! YAY! oh gosh, i can't imagine whats going to happen! Dear Ryoko Blue, please let Winry and Roy work everything out, be together and let Ed find some other person.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 00:53 EDT
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I think I speak for Winry when I say OH SHI- Actually this one had me chuckling a good bit and I think you know why...
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 00:52 EDT
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I think I speak for Winry when I say OH SHI- Actually this one had me chuckling a good bit and I think you know why...
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Title: OMFG I can't stand it
Reviewed By: AboutToSin?who me? Never :O} On: June 15, 2007 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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God Almighty I love the way you write, I can't stand the wait for the next update, does Roy know? He has to, will he sleep with her this night? ohhhh man he has to (daroool daroool) What is Ed going to do, oh man please please hurry up and UPDATE this badboy :O} I hope you never ever give up writing you are such a joy to read. Thank You Thank You
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Title: hmm
Reviewed By: uoa123 On: June 15, 2007 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
roy should kiss winry in front of ed it would be funny
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Title: Welcome Back
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 22:51 EDT
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dum de dum dum! I can smell an Ed/Mustang throw down just around the corner. But truely, Winry & Roy are sooo good together! Plus there's those adorable little ones!
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