| "When the Cherry Blossoms Bloom" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 14:38 EDT
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What do you mean trouble? don't say that! i love MR. Mustang, so protective you can really tell that he and Roy are related. very nice chapter, can't wait for the next one! ^_^
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and once again, wow wow wow and wow! this fic just gets better and better. *cough* winry *cough*cough* with roy *cough*. psst, not Ed. with Roy, not ed :) too bad Ed's not scared of Gerald, yet!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 20:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*in reply to chapter 12 since I have a feeling I'll be doing this again for future chapters* OH SHI-
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 08:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh! this is getting even *more* fantastic!!! here's the strange thing, i *never* liked the idea of Winry being with anyone else except Edward. but now, I DON'T WANT HER TO BE WITH ED! at all! i want her and Roy to get back. (god, i sound like a kid; "i want, i want") heh, i really hope she doesnt have anything with ed. in this fic at least :) Roy & Winry all the way!!
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 12:23 EDT
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I love this fic. Poor Roy i hope everything works. those two really deserve each other... i dont want to cry anymore..
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 02:18 EDT
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Thanks for that, you answered just about all my questions with that chapter. So now I'm waiting for the next one, don't worry if you can't get it up before your trip, but do have fun while your gone =)
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 23:34 EDT
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I had no idea that you had already began the second fic. ^_^ i soo happy. i love it so far and can't wait until your next chapter. I love roy/winry. i can't find any other writter who gets them together as well as you do. ^_^
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Title: BOOHOOOING HERE
Reviewed By: Alaskanbeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 13:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love everything you write about this story, I can't get enough of it. It is nice to see how Winry feels being pg though,I have to admit it will tear me up if her and roy don't get together, not that I don't like the boys but She and Roy need each other...waiting with baited breath for more (daroool daaarool)especialy the sex sick woman I am but you do write that so well. Keep up the fantastic work.
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I honestly admit that I was suprised when I read that Sara was their next guide. Part of me wishes Ed would just get through these trials so he can meet Winry again in real time but at the same time I feel as if Ed doesn't really deserve such an easy out. Your writing is amazing, I hope you have time to update a few chapters soon! Thanks for continuing such a great fic!
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 16:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, your added scenes flowed nicely within the plot of the story. Definitly cutting room floor material! I always get so sad at the end of your chapters because I know I'm going to have to wait to read what happens next! The Roy fighting Bradley/Winry broken necklace scene was wonderful! I loved that, it was saddening yet so perfectly woven into the story! Keep up the great writing, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 01:31 EDT
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Onward, great chapter, that's all to say for now =)
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Reviewed By: TaintedShikonShards [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 16:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter...as always. I'm not sure about this but did you switch tense temporarily somewhere in the middle there...when Ed and Al found out about Huges...maybe It just sounded weird to me or something...anyway, I love that Winry has the power to make Roy promise to return to her. Its just not something Roy as a character would normally do, especially knowing he was going into a dangerous situation with a lot of variables. It was very cute though. I also love that Roy gave her his glove...I know its not a huge gesture or anything but the way you wrote it in gave it so much weight on their relationship and proved (whether or not Ed will admit it) how much Roy really does love Winry, and how much he needs her and wants her to be happy. Overall, beautifully written, I love that Al and Trisha are the attempted voices of reason for Ed at this stage in the game. Its nice to be able to work Trisha into a story when she usually only rarely fits into the plot line. Once again, great job. Keep up the excellent writing!
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 00:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED that chapter. well, i love the whole fanfic but this chap is just... sigh, fab.! haha.. update soon!
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 00:41 EDT
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I love Grannie, she is the best. Yes that was a bit fluffy, but I guess I like fluff since I really enjoyed that chapter. Great work as always =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 00:30 EDT
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good update, it was a bit sappy and I think I want to go cry =)
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