| "Like mother like son" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 14:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry and write another chapter. I'm really enjoying this story!
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Title: >o< oh yea
Reviewed By: DragonTamer94 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ther are a few storys that get me to write anything because the storys aren't that good. But urs was great I'd like to know what happen in the next chapter of the story, so please update soon
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Title: (*=*)
Reviewed By: Star399KOR On: May 23, 2007 09:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was HOT and the lemon awesome and sooo sexy.And to Dream Keeper I am with you I was pissed off at that review too,And you was right to be pissed off I mean if you see it said yaoi YAOI then what the fuck are you in that site anyway please and I love Naruto & SASUKE together hell I am a yaoi fangurl anyway so I love them ALL.Anywho I love the story and I cant wait to read more and I think mednight need to kick Sakura ASS and show that bitch that she has both MEN yeah hehehehe who the boss hehehehe that rigt, anywho loving it write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 00:30 EDT
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OK... So I just read one of your reviews and I got a little pissed. So, I'm gonna rant a bit here... Um, how could you not relize that Sasuke and Naruto were going to EVENTUALLY get together?! I figured that one out pretty damn quickly. And if it's not your thing, then leave it at that. No one wants your explanation. Just say you thought it was going to be different and for your personal preference, you're not gonna read it. I honestly can't stand people who bash stories. Just say you like how the author writes, but you don't agree with some things they wrote. You don't need to be juvenile about it. I personally like your story, I think it's well written (spelling mistakes and all) and I like how you portray the characters. I'm sorry if I offend you, but just don't read it! Honestly. It's the authors story and they'll write it the way they want to- gay, straight, or bi. If you don't like it, DON'T read it. It's not that hard of a concept to grasp. Sorry if I offended people, but I hate how people write crap like that. I think reviews should be constructive criticism and encouragement. Not flames or insults. If you don't like the story, no one's forcing you to read it! Grrr... Sorry about that. I just wanted to say, I like your story and I hope you keep going at it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 00:20 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow... *fans myself* That was hot! I really liked your lemon. Hopefully, you update again soon. I want to know what Sasuke looks like now! I also want to know if he stays changed, so everyone else knows something happened, or does he have a different look like Naruto does to blend in. I want to know what happens next! ^_^
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 20:25 EDT
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Awesome lemon!!! I can't wait to see what will happen next to sasuke and naruto!!! Story is still awesome and keeps getting better!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 22:57 EDT
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Nevermind I am going to stop reading since now Naruto is Bi and of course who does he have a crush on that bastard Sasuke who should be killed I thought this story was going to be good when Naruto had sex with a Female well a female fox but now I know he is also Bi I say no thank you I am sorry but thats just me I just don`t like any stories where Naruto is gay or bi I just think it is wrong its ok to make Sasuke Gay or bi because I hate him and don`t care if he lives or dies so I am sorry to say thats it for e no more reading this story and I do think yor a really really good writer but this isn`t my kind of story heck if you write another story where Naruto is str8 and he is paired up with an actual female then I would read it with no problem
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 22:02 EDT
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Oppps sorry for that review when I saw yaoi I got upset I only got upset or pissed when somebody writes a story and makes Naruto to be gay so I just skiped through chapters just to see which guy Naruto is paired up with but when I saw the lemon and it was a female I just had to review again to say I am sorry heck I don`t care if you make Sasuke to be gay heck I think he is on the show and Plus I hate Sasuke because it seems like everybody thinks he is a GOD so please don`t make Naruto to be gay just make Sasuke be gay ok please and now is the time to go read your story now
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 21:51 EDT
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Awwww man why does almost all the stories that sounds like it is going to be really really good have to end up being a GAY story oh wait I mean a Yaoi no wait there both the same thing so now I have to discard this story from my Favs file
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Reviewed By: Gaara-Is-The-Best [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 20:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stuff tissue up the nose*.....so......good.....must have......more....update soon...*bows*
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Reviewed By: hyperactive pup On: May 17, 2007 21:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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one word.. .. UPDATE!!!! Please pretty please with yaoi on top. I want to see how the story progresses.... Ot really great don't dissapoint your fans because..HELL HATH NO FURY LIKE AN ANGRY FANGIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_dawn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 06:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is quite an interesting one. I like the way in how you changed Naruto from what he is in the series to something that's the complete opposite. I love it and i hope you keep going. By the way i noticed that some of your words and sentences have errors in them, just thought you would like to know.
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Reviewed By: Grrrr_Raaaaawr 0_o [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 17:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!^_^ I suggest that you use spell/grammar check. There is no 'k' in 'now'(as in 'Get over here right now!'), but there is one in 'know'(as in 'I know it's sunny outside, you idiot!')
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: noneofyourbeeswax On: April 26, 2007 17:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update come on i have been waiting for an update like forever plz update im like addictied to the story damit
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 03:23 EDT
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I can't wait to see how sasuke reacts to meet the rest of the family!!!! Sakura is really mean!!! Shoot, if I was I wouldn't care if someone she me show my feelings because I would have smacked sakura in the face a couple of times!!! Talkin to Naruto like that!!! Keep up the good work you are doing a excellent job!!!!!
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