| "Like mother like son" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: firetiger_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 08:35 EDT
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Ah yea it's a good idea, I like the fem kyuubi idea and Naruto with a mate... but i'm not a big fan of anything with guy on guy. other than that interesting story and good work
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Reviewed By: ShadowWalker83 On: April 12, 2007 23:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving the story and looking forward to each update. The only "issue" I've seen is some minor spelling and grammar errors that likely would have been caught if you had a proofreader. Despite that the story is driving forward rather well and I look forward to whatever may come.
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Reviewed By: perfect little girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 13:34 EDT
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awsome!! great story. i wonder what will happen when mednight meets sasuke??
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Reviewed By: DancingMoonLeaf On: April 06, 2007 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear god woman write more dammit. Also remember (sasUKE because sasUKE screams fuck me)
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Reviewed By: DancingMoonLeaves On: April 04, 2007 18:03 EDT
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Style of Writng: 18 Spelling and Grammer: 10 Originality/Creativity: 100,000,000,000,000,000 Enjoyment Factor: 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 Overal Rating: 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 Awesome please write more!! You Rock My Rainbow Colored Socks (remember sasUke, because he just screms fuck me.)
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 18:08 EDT
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very good. update soon
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Reviewed By: Dhaki-sama and her sister Chi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 12:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nicely done. plz update soon?!? cant wait to read more. ja =)
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: FlamingFoxFire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm.... you wanted some suggestions for midnight's nickname right? well.... what luner or something that has to do with the moon or maybe star? well, i Loved IT! and it does not really matter if you spell something wrong as long as the readers understand where you are coming from. understand? But keep on writing { see i think i spelled that wrong!lol} and know i will be keeping an eye on this story so update soon! p.s. pretty good sex scene for your first time!
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Reviewed By: SIKango [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 22:21 EDT
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Its awsome, keep writing
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 16:12 EDT
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It's good. Are you going to make it a threesome? You know with Naruto, Sasuke and Midnight? I think that it would be nice if ya did, it could work, but it's up to you.
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Reviewed By: Dreamkeeper On: March 20, 2007 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic a lot and I can't wait to see everyones reaction to the changes made to Naruto. Update soon!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: drkknight120 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story. i don't think i have seen one like it before. i really like this idea. please update soon!!(makes 100 shadow clones all making puppy dog eyes)
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 20:05 EST
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I just started reading this and it's really great. UPDATE SOON! I have Spring break soon. And by soon , I mean when I hit the weekend. 1 week of no school!
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Reviewed By: Dragon_Lord [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 08:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story had strait 10's, except fo spelling and grammer, from me. That is, until i read that there would be yaoi in this...I am going to have to hurt you. There are so many yaois out now, i want a reagular g/m one. But i have a comprimise. I asume u will make naruto gay in this or sumtin. Well to comprimise the situation, at the very least, make him bi-sexual. Cause i dont get being gay, its just stupid to me, no offense to gay people. If ur gay, try shooting for being bi. I aint, but come on, just being plain gay seems queer, retarded, and all around disturbing, yet again no offense to gay people. So if u were going to make Naruto gay, at least try shooting for him to be bi...Dragon_Lord
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 20:52 EST
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hmm..interesting. i really lyk this. i hope u update this soon??
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