| "Like mother like son" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: hyperactive pup On: May 17, 2007 21:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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one word.. .. UPDATE!!!! Please pretty please with yaoi on top. I want to see how the story progresses.... Ot really great don't dissapoint your fans because..HELL HATH NO FURY LIKE AN ANGRY FANGIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_dawn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 06:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is quite an interesting one. I like the way in how you changed Naruto from what he is in the series to something that's the complete opposite. I love it and i hope you keep going. By the way i noticed that some of your words and sentences have errors in them, just thought you would like to know.
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Reviewed By: Grrrr_Raaaaawr 0_o [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 17:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!^_^ I suggest that you use spell/grammar check. There is no 'k' in 'now'(as in 'Get over here right now!'), but there is one in 'know'(as in 'I know it's sunny outside, you idiot!')
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: noneofyourbeeswax On: April 26, 2007 17:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update come on i have been waiting for an update like forever plz update im like addictied to the story damit
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 03:23 EDT
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I can't wait to see how sasuke reacts to meet the rest of the family!!!! Sakura is really mean!!! Shoot, if I was I wouldn't care if someone she me show my feelings because I would have smacked sakura in the face a couple of times!!! Talkin to Naruto like that!!! Keep up the good work you are doing a excellent job!!!!!
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Reviewed By: firetiger_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 08:35 EDT
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Ah yea it's a good idea, I like the fem kyuubi idea and Naruto with a mate... but i'm not a big fan of anything with guy on guy. other than that interesting story and good work
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Reviewed By: ShadowWalker83 On: April 12, 2007 23:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving the story and looking forward to each update. The only "issue" I've seen is some minor spelling and grammar errors that likely would have been caught if you had a proofreader. Despite that the story is driving forward rather well and I look forward to whatever may come.
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Reviewed By: perfect little girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 13:34 EDT
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awsome!! great story. i wonder what will happen when mednight meets sasuke??
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Reviewed By: DancingMoonLeaf On: April 06, 2007 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear god woman write more dammit. Also remember (sasUKE because sasUKE screams fuck me)
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Reviewed By: DancingMoonLeaves On: April 04, 2007 18:03 EDT
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Style of Writng: 18 Spelling and Grammer: 10 Originality/Creativity: 100,000,000,000,000,000 Enjoyment Factor: 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 Overal Rating: 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 Awesome please write more!! You Rock My Rainbow Colored Socks (remember sasUke, because he just screms fuck me.)
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 18:08 EDT
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very good. update soon
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Reviewed By: Dhaki-sama and her sister Chi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 12:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nicely done. plz update soon?!? cant wait to read more. ja =)
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: FlamingFoxFire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm.... you wanted some suggestions for midnight's nickname right? well.... what luner or something that has to do with the moon or maybe star? well, i Loved IT! and it does not really matter if you spell something wrong as long as the readers understand where you are coming from. understand? But keep on writing { see i think i spelled that wrong!lol} and know i will be keeping an eye on this story so update soon! p.s. pretty good sex scene for your first time!
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Reviewed By: SIKango [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 22:21 EDT
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Its awsome, keep writing
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 16:12 EDT
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It's good. Are you going to make it a threesome? You know with Naruto, Sasuke and Midnight? I think that it would be nice if ya did, it could work, but it's up to you.
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