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Reviewed By: firekitten On: June 13, 2007 13:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well that was a turn i like it but it kidda came out of nowhere but still good. but i NEED closure so please right a sequel and posebly (if you can) a lemon for midnight, naruto and sasuke. i do understand that midnight and sasuke have to get used to each other but it's gotta happen some time. right? tho you're not the first to use the idea of making naruto a demon or half-demon i gave you a 10 in creativity because you explain it in a believable way with in the plot of the story. its not like *puff* he is demon. but if you could explain the whole forth trusting kyubi and why she attacked in the first place that would be great. and a got the idea that the third some what understood way naruto did what he did and left, bit naruto said that since he respected the third the kanoha was safe as long as he protected it what happens when he is gone. and what about iruka that man a had a mayor soft spot for naruto even with tho he had the kyubi so what happens to him. if i can make a suggestion don't make him hate naruto for what he did at the end because i don't concider that believable given his personalety in the anime and you did not change that in your writing, but it's your story, just thought i'd let you know what would be appeciated. oh and mayor props for the difference in font for different speakers because you pulled it off well, normaly i hate that but it's because the author can't keep it straight,but you did. well, i'll be waiting for the sequel so please make one.
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Reviewed By: Wanderer of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 17:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please write a sequal
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Reviewed By: kusangi On: June 12, 2007 16:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it and think there should be a sequel . I like the not killing sakura part it goes with naruto's personality
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Title: Like mother like son
Reviewed By: bc On: June 12, 2007 10:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please i have to have more! and that bitch should have die!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Like mother like son
Reviewed By: BLDHILLC On: June 12, 2007 08:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i for one love this story i kind of wish you did kill off that bitch. i for one would love a sequel.
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 06:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thought this was awsome pls pls PLS write a sequel
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Title: Make a sequel
Reviewed By: Gaara rules On: June 12, 2007 02:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write a sequel its the coolest fanfic i read please write more
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Title: SQUEAL PLEASE
Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh that was a really good endung but sasuke should have killed sakura she needs to DIE!!!! Please write a squeal It would be really cool !!!! If you don't write a squeal i'll cry!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the most beautiful and slightly strange story I have ever read.
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Reviewed By: Mystic_Rose On: June 11, 2007 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved your story!!! I would love it if you would write a sequel to it!!! It would be really sad it that was the end of it. I'm sure that many of the other readers also would like to read more.
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Reviewed By: Star399KOR On: June 11, 2007 04:12 EDT
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IM Love this story its very good and i love the new look in Sasuke its very hot and that lemon damn. (0) But i had to ask can sasuke have babies now for naruto? And i also LOVE that Naruto is on TOP yesss i can not stand when he is made to be stupid and confused in some stories,I like him hard and bad and soooo loving i like that in your story.Oh and can you write about Midnight kicking Sakura ASS and she find out that she has loss Sasuke to midnight because she will play his girlfriend at first to hide that his love is Naruto and then later at the end she find out that not only is Sasuke with Midnight but Naruto to that with be fun to read please and i hope you like the ideas if you what it.
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Reviewed By: quatre n takato are te best [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 17:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please???
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Reviewed By: DancingMoonLeaf On: June 09, 2007 03:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sees new and improved sasUKE* *dies of blood loss* God i hate how people are ragging on you for the yaoi lemon (Naruto makes a uber hot bi) Keep making you fucking awesome story the way you want it. Update and get a Kyuubi plushie and a cookie of your flavor.
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Reviewed By: Norlan4u [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 07:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
em well were to begin first yes English is not my natural language ^^ second this is my first Review ever so if you dont like it Bite me an the only thing im Saying is like all Great Stories the Chapters are too damn short *pouts* as for other reviews im Straight and mostly dont like Yaoi but if the Story is good Yaoi or not is not something that matters Keep it up but please please make the Chapters a bit longer *grins wide and jumps up and down in Anticipation* Enjoyment 9 because i reserve the 10 for fics that get all my kinks wich i will not tell :P
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Reviewed By: Mystic_Rose On: June 07, 2007 04:35 EDT
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Does Sasuke only have one tail? And why is midnight covered in fur? Can she change that?
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