| "Like mother like son" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: foxyhinata On: October 14, 2007 15:59 EDT
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i was wondering if you would be willing to allow me to burrow or use of ur story for fanfiction.net. plz send me an e-mail at yinfox07@yahoo.com for further discussionon the arangment. thank you.
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Title: make the sequal
Reviewed By: oops^^ On: September 01, 2007 01:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make it this is like the only fanfic i like to read on mediaminer just make it every one wants it please ur fans!!!!!
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Reviewed By: TTT10135 On: August 25, 2007 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story I have read in a long time the only thing I noticed was that when you used the word from, you actually used the word from I didn't know if that was just your style or what, but other than that it was simply brillant. I would love for you to do a sequel if you would it would be a fantastic follow up.
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Title: good story
Reviewed By: meatzman2 On: July 27, 2007 18:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
brilliantly written fic very interesting indeed and i really enjoyed it except for one thing... the yaoi aspect of naru/sasu. It's just my prejudice I personally find homosexuality completely perverse and wrong (I'm an atheist by the way). I felt however that you handled it very well by making naruto more effeminate. I have to say that it was a vital contribution to the story and that I see the need to include it. Without the homosexual stuff I'd have upped the enjoyment factor to 10 but probably would have had to downgrade the rating to 8 as the story would have suffered as a consequence of you having to remove it.
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Reviewed By: the man with no name On: June 19, 2007 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make a sequel or gaara the panda will kill u
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 22:55 EDT
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who's the uke?
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Title: Sequal?!?
Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 12:43 EDT
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The story ended? Why did you let the story end like that?
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Title: sequal
Reviewed By: me On: June 15, 2007 05:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sequal sequal gimme sequal i need sequal i want sequal if no sequal i kill you gimme gimme
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 19:33 EDT
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I really did enjoy the story. There were a few spelling mistakes through out it, but otherwise it's an interesting plot twist. I would like to see where you would take a sequel. So, I vote for one. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inu_Fan3006 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 18:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gives a fangirlish sream* I NEED A SEQUAL!! PLEASE WRITE A SEQAL!!!I LOVE THE STORY!!! DONT STOP IF YOU DO I WILL CRY!!!!!
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Title: i
Reviewed By: firekitten On: June 13, 2007 13:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well that was a turn i like it but it kidda came out of nowhere but still good. but i NEED closure so please right a sequel and posebly (if you can) a lemon for midnight, naruto and sasuke. i do understand that midnight and sasuke have to get used to each other but it's gotta happen some time. right? tho you're not the first to use the idea of making naruto a demon or half-demon i gave you a 10 in creativity because you explain it in a believable way with in the plot of the story. its not like *puff* he is demon. but if you could explain the whole forth trusting kyubi and why she attacked in the first place that would be great. and a got the idea that the third some what understood way naruto did what he did and left, bit naruto said that since he respected the third the kanoha was safe as long as he protected it what happens when he is gone. and what about iruka that man a had a mayor soft spot for naruto even with tho he had the kyubi so what happens to him. if i can make a suggestion don't make him hate naruto for what he did at the end because i don't concider that believable given his personalety in the anime and you did not change that in your writing, but it's your story, just thought i'd let you know what would be appeciated. oh and mayor props for the difference in font for different speakers because you pulled it off well, normaly i hate that but it's because the author can't keep it straight,but you did. well, i'll be waiting for the sequel so please make one.
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Reviewed By: Wanderer of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 17:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please write a sequal
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Reviewed By: kusangi On: June 12, 2007 16:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it and think there should be a sequel . I like the not killing sakura part it goes with naruto's personality
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Title: Like mother like son
Reviewed By: bc On: June 12, 2007 10:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please i have to have more! and that bitch should have die!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Like mother like son
Reviewed By: BLDHILLC On: June 12, 2007 08:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i for one love this story i kind of wish you did kill off that bitch. i for one would love a sequel.
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