| "Forced Beginnings - Black Flowers" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zungda [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay this story is totlayy awesome! I've re-read the whole thing about a million times but quite frankly, I beleive it is time for another update.
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Reviewed By: vegeta_godess On: March 28, 2004 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is awesome!!!!! i never thought of vegeta/pan before. but i think that its cool, i'm really into it. you really should update soon!!!!! pleaseeeeeeee!
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Reviewed By: angry psyco fan On: January 02, 2004 13:35 CST
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hey c'mon, that's not fair!!! you haven't updated this in ages!!!!!!! aaaaaaaaaaaargh!!! i can't take this anymore!!! this is killing me!!! i'm going nuts!!!! mwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahaha!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHU!!!! !!!!!!!!
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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: GothicBlacre or SayainBabe On: November 26, 2003 00:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story i hope you write more soon, the story is very dramatic but thats what I like to read but really I'm not a Vegeta/Pan Fan but the story is a ten out of a ten hope youe write more :)
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Reviewed By: Brittany On: August 23, 2003 08:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awsome!!!! I hope you update soon. Ive never read one like this fanfic. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: RE:to the previous reviewer On: August 23, 2003 01:27 CDT
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I think that homosexuality is wrong! Not only is it codomed by sociaty but it is also not done in nature. Humans r the ONLY ones to make same sex relationships. so where is ur reasoning anyway |
Reviewed By: P/V Lover On: August 13, 2003 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To the person who reviewed before me:
How do you know Bulma is Vegeta's soulmate? What are you, some all-knowing prophet? I may not think Pan is Vegeta's soulmate, but just because they were BORN AT DIFFERENT TIMES doesn't mean their relationship is sick! As long as she's not a CHILD (and at 16 she isn't a child, she might be childish, but she still has enough adult in her and at least she looks like an adult in the fic!) it's fine! Don't you see that the only reason people think it's wrong is for some of the same reasons people think homosexuality is wrong? Just because society says it's wrong, doesn't mean it is. He's older, yes, but be open-minded for a second! If they love each other and she's of a reasonable age to be DATING, then what the hell's wrong with it?
Klara, you keep raising controversy! It's time for people to learn to not be slaves to society, and to think outside the box a little. I hope you don't feel discouraged just because some narrow-minded readers tell you your work is "gross", because you know damn well what it is and I'm sure a lot of these reviewers agree! |
Reviewed By: !!! On: July 15, 2003 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY... AND HOW CAN SOME OF YOU PEOPLE LIKE VEGETA AND PAN TOGETHER HE'S OLDER THAN HER GRANDPA AND BULMA IS VEGETA'S SOUL MATE... BUT THIS STORY IS SOO COOL I DONT MIND BULMA AND VEGETA ARENT TOGETHER BUT NOT PAN AND VEGETA EITHER :( |
Reviewed By: Lerial On: July 11, 2003 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Rating for this chapter: 8.5)
This one was dark, brooding, and more psychologically affecting than the past 2 chapters. I love the embellishment on Eira's character--we get to see her sexy side. ^^
Personally, i think this was worth the wait. Intrigue, suspicion, and of course, the hook ever drawing us into the depths of your brilliant mind/story. |
Reviewed By: Kay On: July 07, 2003 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wheres Bra? shes barley in here but all in all i luv this story |
Reviewed By: Arit On: July 04, 2003 00:13 CDT
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Hey, I was just cheking if there were any more new chapters... *gazes at the computer screen* nope, no uploads ¬_¬ ....
but dont worry I could wait another 714360 seconds wich is exactly how many seconds have passed since your last update... but really NO PRESSURE!!! 0_o
Oh and a quote I found... I just thought that it would fit so well to Eira: "I'm not cute! I'm dark and mysterious and pissed off!"
-Almost Famous
Awwwww!!! I could almost saw her, with her arms crossed, knelt in the middle of the living room in CC with big fluffy rabbit ears!!!... mehehehehe funny...
UPDATE
Bye =) |
Reviewed By: AlexaJewel On: July 03, 2003 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FontColor I love this fanfic SSSOOO much!!! Will you please keep writing? It isn't finished yet! And you put Completed! Please Please Please Please Please Please Please finish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nowhere Man On: June 30, 2003 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Something intangible was wrong with the first three chapters, but overall one of the best fanfics I've ever read |
Reviewed By: Sinu-Yasha On: June 28, 2003 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like but...hell i'm so i don't know how to explain it. I understand the story in all but everybody sleeping with each other i believe i'm confused. Also can you please have one of these future children explained the rest of the story, you know about the sayians lives while still in the breeding stock. |
Reviewed By: LadyoftheLake [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 04:28 CDT
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oh good, you've posted it. ^^ time now for a little publicity, i suppose...*smiles evilly*
catrissy 4 eva!!
~lady~ |
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