| "Forced Beginnings - Black Flowers" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Reviewed By: SaiyanGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. It was so great that I just started to tell some of my buddies about it. Continue soon, I am dying for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Shi-Saiyan On: November 28, 2002 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story kept me up until dawn! When i reached the last page and found out it wasn't finished, I almost cried! There's just something about the unspeakable, forbidden idea of having sex with someone that is completely off limits, be it because of being related, age factor or just that whole completely unreal "Not In This Lifetime", "He's like my brother/sister", "Dende, that's just wrong!" type of thing. Keep writing, please! IF i don't read the end of this thing soon, I'm gonna go nuts! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 22:28 CST
Comment/Review:
WEEE!!! =D More Great Chappies!!!
I really love this story, like you have no idea. It's like those types of stories where if you never find out what happens, the feeling will eat at you forever, regardless if it's years afterwards and even if you pass the DragonballZ stage, you'll always have it at you...
O_o;; I really need to get a life, don't I?!? XD lmao!!!
Well, needless to say, I love this story lots and lots, so please update ASAP!!! ^_^ THANKS!!! *glomps* ME WUVS YOU AND YOUR STORY!!! O_O!!! ^_^ Keep writing!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: Meiyume [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaah!!!!! BRILLLIANT!!! CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!
*hugs*
I love this story....but I can't believe that Goten is acting like that...anyways...more soon! I have to clean my room now...ja! |
Reviewed By: Tyleet On: November 24, 2002 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
wwwwhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyy?????? Why did you have to make poor Vegeta be such a hated character...i still love him...But why cant PAn and Vegeta love eachother? WHY?! PLEase tell me...i deserve to know...! PLease answer my questions! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Serpent On: November 23, 2002 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is not only a wonderful tale of angst and drama but it's also creativity at it's best. The author has done a wonderful job of captivating the audience from the very beginning with a story that effects not only the past, but the present and future as well. It's like a trilogy of delectable drama in one beautifully wrapped package. The author has done a fantastic job of developing the original characters that are the heart and soul of this fic. What makes them so fantastic, is that they don't seem to be original at all. In fact, they seem to blend in naturally with the existing characters. Every bit of history revealed about the youths is yet another piece in the mysterious puzzle of their heavily veiled past. All of the youths intrigue us in their own way and just when you think you know all there is to know about them, the author throws something out there that is truly unexpected...and yet, it is absolutely fascinating. The more we read about the youths, the more we want to know of their past, the fate of their past parents, and the effects that their interaction will have on their future parents. The interaction between the youths and their surroundings is a unpredictable as life itself. Everything they do seems to draw the reader deeper into the story where there is hope that more of these mysterious youths will later be revealed. I love this fic because it not only quenches the reader's desire for exceptional writing but it also leaves you wanting more...and more...and more. I'm not sure if it's possible to get enough of this amazing fic and if it is, i definitely don't want to know about it. ^_~ Keep up the sensational work Klara and good luck with the reviews. Kami knows this fic deserves a ton of them. This fic is in a class all its own. ^_^ ~SS~ |
Reviewed By: Morgan (Morgause Nokami) On: November 22, 2002 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Woohoo!! Gotta love this fic ^^ |
Reviewed By: LadyoftheLake [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 04:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*big eyes* it's here, it's here, it's finally here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mweehehehehehehehee!!!!!!!
I luv Black Flowers!!!!! ^_^ the new chapter's really great!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: bran On: November 21, 2002 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a very good story but whats up with all the back traking its sooo confussing!!! Anyway please update very soon
bran |
Reviewed By: Kiaa On: November 19, 2002 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why are there so many MISSING CHAPTERS? Is this an accident? Are they going to go back up? If so, why were they taken down in the first place? AND IF THEY AREN'T COMMING BACK, DOES THAT MEAN YOU AREN'T GOING TO ADD ANOTHER ONE?
I'm in a panic here! Please update, or at least answer some of my questions...
WHERE ARE THE CHAPTERS?? AHHH! |
Reviewed By: LadyoftheLake [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 03:17 CST
Comment/Review:
is it just me, or is bf suddenly missing 5 or so very good chapters? |
Reviewed By: KrimsonTwilight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a truly incredible piece of work, and I, like everyone else, am anxiously waiting to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Frustrated Reviewer On: November 18, 2002 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm obsessed with this story. In love with it. But please, what happened to the other chapters? Are you going to update soon? Is there something I'm missing?
Anyway, DON'T LOSE YOUR MAD TALENT! I LOVE YOUR WORK, AND SO SHOULD EVERYONE ELSE!
Thanks!
-Frustrated Reviewer |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more mopre more more please up date this fast I'm lost into this story |
Reviewed By: carrola On: November 15, 2002 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS SSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOODDD!!!! please update soon!!!! |
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