| "Once For All Time" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Title: OOO
Reviewed By: Janice Park On: March 14, 2007 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hwen I clicked on this I was never expecting the story to be sooo good! Or so well written, amazing job, I really mean it too! Youv'e donw amazing on this! Work I mean... Tee Hee, silly mee. Anyneway, update soon!
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Reviewed By: MistedVines [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading this story! I love how you write (your an awesome writer) please update soon! Cheers! MV
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Title: AWW
Reviewed By: KTbinga On: March 14, 2007 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's why I am SO glad to be an only child! Great story, I love it and CANNOT wait for another chapter!!
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 21:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Loved that, Amelia and Roy seem to have the type of relationship that my brother and I have, mainly tease one another till one of us got our ass kicked by the other (unfortunately I was usually on the receiving end until I told our mom), but also caring deeply for each other, at least I've found that the more you tease someone the more you care for them. Ed getting promoted is just too funny, alright I laughed the entire way except for when they had to deal with Sloth. I seem to be warming up to Amelia. Keep up the good work =)
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Reviewed By: MakiyuHimura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 20:28 CDT
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What's this about a party Elric? Hm..*suspicious look* Your trying to cheat on me again aren't YOu ED? Haha lol Just kidding keep it up. I so jealous of you though Bekah x.x
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Reviewed By: SkippingAlice [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Update soon, kay?
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Title: BOOM!!!
Reviewed By: ctrzy On: March 11, 2007 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thsi is leik ttaly crzy!! I love thsi stroy!!!! update snoo!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Woot!!
Reviewed By: Britni Fullmetal Otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot!! I love your story!!! I can't wait till the next chapter! Second Lietuenant Elric *giggles* And thanks again sooo much for liking my story. I feel so loved!! "GIVE ME BACK THE GODDAMN BOOK!!" Haha that was funny. And sorry I haven't really been writing in my fanfic *blush* I've been very busy (being a freshman in high school and all) hehe Keep it up!!
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Title: -.- Sleepy
Reviewed By: Makii(NSI) On: March 11, 2007 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the quick overall ratings. Just pick a number then..BAM.. your done. XD Nah it's really good I can't wait to see how this story unfolds. I hope it's as good as the plans you have for Flying Backwards. I'm going to go try to use the little time before I study to get my chapter done so I can do something right for my readers. Keep on surpassing me when it comes to writing Bekah. ^-^
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Reviewed By: MistedVines [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Selim eh? Can't say I've seen him tey, but whatever update again soon! I have to agree with hiya24 I don't really know Amelia yet, but knowing you I soon will! Anyway, until the next chapta!!!
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 14:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
well, I liked it. I don't feel I know your oc very well yet so I'm going to leave my thoughts of her alone till you update (wink). From what I've seen of Selim in the anime, he is small and cute, dark hair, can't remember eye color but looked like he was between six and eight. If I'm wrong don't shoot me =). I like the story so keep it up and I will continue to review =)
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Title: MANGA GIRL!!!
Reviewed By: KTbinga On: March 11, 2007 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo!! I love this!!! MIA IS SO CUTE >
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Reviewed By: YvonneandNeji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on this, well written and flowing easily. I love the chemistry between Roy and Amelia, they really seem like siblings. Another chapter soon, I cannot wait!
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Title: =^^=
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, I've seen this plot done numerous times, but I like how you've animated the characters. It complements the story alot. the chapter was the perfect length, not to long, but not snappy. The roy part at the End was really random, but it made me laugh. I can't wait to read the party! good job, happy writing, and keep on bashing the bashers! :)P.S My rating is not following a patern, I actually arted how I thought it was, and thats just how it came out! =^^=
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Reviewed By: kara-chana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 04:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...This looks really good. I love that you've taken the basic 'Roy's younger sister meets the Elrics' and turned in ito something great! I cannot wait to see how this grows!!!! Update soon!
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