| "Once For All Time" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Title: Uh...
Reviewed By: MakiyuHimura [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 17:52 CDT
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Ok I have no idea where the other half of my review went so let me repost it. That's a spot that I found to fix...and prolly the only one. And yes WInry go away before you turn into evil monster from our RP winry XD
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Title: You're no on MSN ;-;
Reviewed By: MakiyuHimura [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Edwar d grunted, feeling as though he had been doused in cold water.
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Reviewed By: YvonneandNeji [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter--as always. Update again soon.
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Reviewed By: MistedVines [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 04:04 CDT
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Why am I up reading your stories so late? --Because their amazing! Please continue updating--I cannot stand the waiting!!
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Reviewed By: KTbinga On: April 10, 2007 06:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! This story just gets better and better! Please update again soon!!
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Reviewed By: YvonneandNeji [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update! This story is so much fun to read, Amelia is a loveable and totally belivable character. Update again soon!
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Title: Hnn...
Reviewed By: Electric_Sapphire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I wasn't sure about the story at first, as fics that involve OCs with any type of relation to Mustang are usually really bad, but I'm glad I gave this one a chance. Amelia isn't a terrible character- in fact, she's quite good. I can't pinpoint the factor that enables her to be a capable soldier while not becoming a Mary Sue, but there you are- good job! On another note, though, she addresses Edward as 'Second Lieutenant', which would mean he got a demotion, not a promotion. Just with his alchemy certification, Ed ranks Major, which is above both Hawkeye and Havoc. The next rank up is Lieutenant Colonel, which was Hughes's old rank. :D Good job anyways, and I hope to see more from you soon.
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Title: -.-
Reviewed By: MakiyuHimura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 18:47 CDT
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My life is a living hell right now, so the "My brother senses are tingling" made me smile XD Thanks bekah and it's looking good.
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Reviewed By: kara-chana [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 08:29 CDT
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...but why Winry? I hate Winry. NOOOO!!! BITCH ALERT!! ...Sorry, hyper. Hey, hey! Do you have any ramen at you're house? "cause I'm gonna eat it.
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Reviewed By: kara-chana [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 08:26 CDT
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O.O You FINALLY updated! ...Not that you had taken forever or anything...
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Reviewed By: Janice Park On: April 08, 2007 08:23 CDT
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Ooopsies! I'm so bad with typos!!
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Reviewed By: Janice Park On: April 08, 2007 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! YOU UPDATED!! Horray!! I love this chapter, I ahope yuo fell better!! Bye!!!
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Title: bro and sis rock
Reviewed By: Britni Fullmetal Otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story ^^ and your brother and sister thing is so funny!! They kinda act like me and my brother. I'm the older sibling though, so I'm more like Roy, very demanding hehe Don't foget to keep updating!! And comment on my stories please *waves* bye bye
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Reviewed By: kara-chana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the update!! ANOTHER CHAPTA SOON!! T.T Please?
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Janice Park On: March 14, 2007 22:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my! Silly me, sorry for all the typos!
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