| "A Walk in the Sunlight" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Title: foreshadowing
Reviewed By: soniya On: June 27, 2008 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
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i just really wanted to menstion that the last sentence was, to me, way too much foreshadowing.... its like putting icening on the cake, added with sugar, candies, gummy bear. etc. so yeah thats all i wanted to say, other than that it seems cool. this is for chapter two.
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Reviewed By: Irene On: June 11, 2008 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an insanely good read. I've really enjoyed all of it, I read it in just a few hours, and I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 23:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOw. I am angry how no one seems to know about this story. It is REALLY good. YOu deserve more than 24. Especially when stupid stories with no sense have hundreds. Idiots. Any way. This story is just chalk full of emotion. It feels like im watching a soap opera kinda. But I do really love it. I can t wait for the next part. =D
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Reviewed By: Geminia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful piece and I hope Karou accepts. This has been a wonderful read and you are a very talented writer. I have enjoyed this piece from the first chapter and look forward to your updates. Thank-you for writing and I look forward to future works.
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Title: Tear
Reviewed By: blue wolf On: May 22, 2008 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was great. I love iit please keep up the good work. I hope that Koaru will let Kenshin help let her have fun in the sun. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you Thank you. Please update soon. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: taity [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a refreshing K&K fic. Nice to read a kenshin/vampire flick w/o the gore! I hope Yahiko makes an appearance - it won't be the same w/o him and his 'busu's lol Keep up the good work :D
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: April 13, 2008 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is great please keep it up. i all most thought that you stop writing this story it is great plaese on writing. update soon. and please let every thing work out for the better good (cheesy i know) pplaese up date.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 13:18 CST
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i guess that canine species aren't infected by the vampire thing as sampson must have gotten some good bites in. . . wonderful engaging, captivating and entertaining eloquently written story. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Jack Black On: January 06, 2008 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I've read your Bio and I just want to say that you are a very good writer. I'm a MAJOR!!!!!!! fan fiction reader and when I come across a writer that I really like I cherish them like beautiful gems and I can honestly say you are one of them. I really wish that you would write more fan fiction it is a real shame that you don't, oh and a liked your new chapter, though I will miss the dog. I don't usually write reviews but in this case I made an exception. I really do wish you would write more fan fiction. I look forward to more chapters from you.
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 13:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
GAHH! How could you stop there and take so long to update? *SOB* Update soon, PLEASE?
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: September 26, 2007 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for updating. i hope that your does will in karate. it a good and hard working sport. please conution on with this story it is great update soon.
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Reviewed By: gure On: August 26, 2007 14:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've so enjoyed reading this story, even if I've been Very Bad about leaving reviews. I love the character development, and Kaoru's father is just awesome. No one is going to hurt his little girl...even if that means hurting his little girl himself. Hmm. You've kept such a good pace, and each chapter leaves me all anxious and excited about what's going to happen next! It was so satisfying to see Kenshin and Kaoru stop dancing around one another and finally admit their feelings! However, Kenshin knows most of Kaoru's secrets...what's she going to do when she finally realizes that Kenshin's been keeping a whopper from her? ^_^ There have been hints, and Dr. Genzai's not-so-subtle flat-out telling her, but I'm so looking forward to that dawning realization. Nice, nice job!
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Title: A Walk in the Sunlight
Reviewed By: blue wolf On: August 25, 2007 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love i hope that they do fing a rea; cure one of these days. your story had caught. i hope that keshin can make kaoru's day the best she has ever had and help heal the wounds that are not seen. please keep up and up date soon. please!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Goldy On: August 24, 2007 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story... Please do update it, it would be such a shame to never finish this story! -Alex
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!! Dinner with Kaoru's parents...should be interesting!! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
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