| "Street Dogs" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 04:07 CDT
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LOL Haha! This is a great story and all but I'd like to point out that your summary says "A local PUBIC war" instead of a "PUBLIC" war HAHA! Lol cracks me up. *sigh* Sorry, I've only recently graduated from High school. I still have some freshman mentalities.
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Reviewed By: xCarCrashHeartx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 14:02 CST
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keep writing please!
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Reviewed By: nown On: September 11, 2007 22:24 CDT
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update already!!!
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Reviewed By: i'm Hiei81 On: July 12, 2007 01:07 CDT
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this is in ragards to the 1st chapter. i liked it but i know you can be more descriptive then that. i'm not saying to do it but why don't you rewrite the 1st chapter?
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Reviewed By: 1love13 On: June 04, 2007 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE PLEASEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think mostly the reason we all find this fic to be hot is because we know that its not just a dog, the dog will turn into an amazingly hot man. I mean what girl wouldn't fuck a dog if she knew he was a hot guy? Anyway, Amazing, nicely done and dont let people who say ur crazy (if there are any) get u down. Your story is awesome!
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Title: Street Dogs
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: shikiori(nsi) On: May 20, 2007 17:08 CDT
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um. . . WOW. That was . . . interesting. And awsome, don't get me wrong, but . . . WOW. Just WOW.
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 15:27 CDT
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its about time you updated. love the chapter. update soon this time
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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did you know your the best smut writer i have read?! that was extremely sexy!!!!! i praise you and the real doggie style!!!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 18:02 CDT
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THAT WAS SO HOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!! I just found this story, and it is the nastiest piece of smut on this site! I can't wait for the next chapter! B reading U~ Later!
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 10:23 CDT
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OO! New chappie up! An awesome one too! LOL! please!please!Please!Please! upadate soon :D
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Reviewed By: @___@ On: May 18, 2007 04:23 CDT
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Oooh...kinky ;D Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 01:05 CDT
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And I'm reading this in the morning before school why? Stupid, stupid, stupid, and I just took a shower too... Heh, for me, I can find almost anything hot 'xcept rape - at least in a fiction, not in real life. But saying Kagome stuck the brush up her ink well...? Ahhh, in that case she's really out to sabotage for Kikyo! That was supposed to be her grand number! Ah, I got it! You're trying to get Kagome fired and then hired by Inuyasha and then... MORE SEX TO THE PEOPLE! *pant pant* Likey likey!
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Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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