| "Beautiful Life" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: fadedLily [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm really liking this so far. I hope you continue soon. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 18:09 CST
Comment/Review:
howdy howdy..thanks for updating.. i wonder who the 'stranger' is..
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Reviewed By: Crazy_Lil_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh i'm loving this! And i want a Gary!! He seems like so much fun! Is this going to finish a 1x2x5? I hope so! 1x2x5 = yummy!! xD Though a Garyx5 would be cute! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nightmuse [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 10:36 CDT
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*snicker* Good one Heero. At least you said 'mess' instead of 'impair'. Nice addition that 'Fei caught Quatre's Look. Memory may be gone, but his intelligence at least seems decently intact. Provided Gary isn't in said room.
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Reviewed By: flying fish On: April 19, 2007 13:37 CDT
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Ahh, I'm glad you post on this site too. I usually read at a different one. This story has totally caught my interest and I'm looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: AngelicChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 18:04 CDT
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I love this story. Update soon.
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Title: Delicious!
Reviewed By: JennyDangerously On: April 02, 2007 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this so far, and I'd love it even more if you continued! Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: inquisitive On: March 24, 2007 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Excellent story so far, I really enjoy the suspense and character development that you've so masterfully employed here. Though your writing style is, at times, highly lacking in proper grammatical mechanics (for one, you have a plethora of sentences lacking a noun...), there are hardly any spelling errors at all, which is very commendable. I especially enjoy the way you can retell a past event (i.e. Quatre and Trowa's first confession of love) in such a compelling manner without using any dialogue or lengthy paragraphs at all. All in all, this looks to be a promising story--please update soon! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!
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