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Reviewed By: rosiel On: June 11, 2007 13:07 EDT
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u just like torturing them don't u? anyway thanks for updateing! =D
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Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yesh!Fantastic update once again ^ ^ I absolutely love this story and the way things play out in it *jumps with glee* Hope to read more soon and keep it up cuz your doing a great job on it ^ ~
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 18:14 EDT
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yay there together, and i hope he doesn't go back with is mom, write more more more kay
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Reviewed By: You know who I am On: June 05, 2007 10:57 EDT
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Very good! Aww, everything is getting better for Elias :) Seriously, though. I'll have to ignore this story (or the next 2 updates) for a while so I can enjoy it better. I hate having to wait for your genius mind to get another chapter up and running! :P
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Reviewed By: rosiel On: June 04, 2007 21:34 EDT
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awesome!XD please continue with the lucasXelias pairing. and update soon
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 14:18 EDT
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Definatley awsomw! This story just keeps getting better! It really looks like things are getting better, but i still can hardley wait to see what happens next. You rock, so keep up the great work and update frequently!!!!!
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Title: Loved
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 01:59 EDT
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I soooo love this story! I can't wait til the next chapter so update soon kay? Oh! Keep up the good work on your stories cuz they are really good ^ ~
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 17:49 EDT
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write more please
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 10:31 EDT
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!!!!!!!!Omigawd! That was a really good chapter! It really was kind of funny with Elias being high, and it was really cute too. I absolutley loved the very end of the chapter. it was so....sweet! Yur awsome, so keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: rosiel On: May 28, 2007 20:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as you can see i gave you 10 on all of the ratings since i love you so much and really enjoyed reading this story! =D i'm so happy that you updated and that lucas and elias is finally together again. please update real soon, kay?
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Title: :DDD
Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 17:55 EDT
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Eeeeee! < 33333333333...... That's all I have to say o.o.-Metalic (Pebbles56@gmail.com)
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Reviewed By: good job On: May 28, 2007 13:42 EDT
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can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you can post soon :)
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Title: Please update again
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 18:15 EDT
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I really like how things are turning up ^ ~ I hope that you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: unexpected On: May 24, 2007 10:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story so far. You've kept it realistic and have had alot of suspense! I have enjoyed reading it and will check back frequently for (hopefully) updates! Please continue with the story, I am very interested! Might I suggest though, if youre headed for a mature approach on things, when you write scenes that involve sexual content, you be a bit less... vague about things? I can see you pay attention to detail and youre very descriptive, so i dont think it should be a problem! Thanks. :] and ps i like the lucasxelias pairing alot! sheekxlucas is cute, though.
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Title: Inside Out
Reviewed By: lost_sasuke_loves_itachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 15:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know it may seem low but thats what I rate everyone on there first story I read. But I did enjoy it very much and I do hope you write more stories. I as a gay guy tend to see some of these type of relations in stories I read that have brothers and it makes me wonder are all gay guys lives similar to these stories as mine is? I know its practically hard to believe but me and my aniue pretty much loved each other before he was killed in an accident. So I tend to like stories like this one here.
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