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Title: wow
Reviewed By: SillyBilly5463 On: August 26, 2011 06:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a gripping read! im so dissapointed this story is abandoned though! it was flowing so so good, i care for the characters so much already. One of the very best incest storys I have ever read. It would be so great to see it posted on adult fan fiction, you would get so many reviews on that website I tel you now. And this story deservs it. Hope to see a update one day. |
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2011 02:30 EDT
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god I'm still holding out for a update. I need to let go. Haha. :C |
Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: VenomInMyBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 11:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowee! I read the first chapter and already I'm hooked. Lol nice plot and I feel so sorry for Elias. Damn his sexy brother! Lol I wrote a incest story about twilight on here, so you should check it out and see if you like it. See ya. Lol
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Reviewed By: lost_sasuke_loves_itachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 01:35 EDT
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It has been a while since I updated myself on this story but OMG I remember why I love it truly. Poor Elias so conflicted and confused. Trying to love older people isn't easy at all. I mean they just make things out to be so much more difficult then it has to be. Anyways great job so far can't wait for the rest.
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Title: oh nooo
Reviewed By: nutty_you_are On: May 07, 2009 06:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wohoo another chapter already! and oh nooo, now im worried that this is the end of this great story. if lucas dies its just gonna make me rip out my hair in frustration. oh how i pray you arnt wrapping up the story now. eek. hopefully he just ends up in hospital. wow basically thier whole family has been in hospital. lol. baaaad luck for them. i hope the future for eliot and lucas is somewhat happy. although im not expecting them to be together in the end. if thier will be a end. thanks for nother great chpater, but i do miss the eliot an lucas fluffy interaction. ha.
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Title: breesasha90@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: janae On: May 07, 2009 00:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the two chapters back to back, I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see if Lucas is alive
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Title: Loved it
Reviewed By: NUTtty_you_are On: May 06, 2009 18:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just read the chapter, and of course i loved it. i suck at giving constructive criticism, but then again i didnt find anything wrong with it. Man everything's getting so depressing. I LOVE IT! depressing stories are great.poor lucus and eliot. i dont really like sheek though. hes helpful but he bugs me. il be eagerly anticipating ur next update, hopefully it wont be next year. lol. :) thanks for writing such a great story.
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Title: oh whoops
Reviewed By: nutty_you_are On: May 06, 2009 18:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
haha i just looked at the reviews and realised i had said "i hate you" quite alot. lol wtf.sorry. cant remember doing that. :/ (P.S SORRY FOR SPAMMING U IN UR REVIEW SECTION, MY BAD)
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: nutty you are On: May 06, 2009 18:00 EDT
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OMG! OK i havnt read it yet! but when i got the email u updated, i was ammmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaazeeeeed! il review it again when i atually read it! thank you thanku thanku for updating! this was my obsessive story!. sadly i cant really remember what has happened.poohs. i tried to reread it once on here but it had dissapeared somewhere, and it made me sad. wow im a loser. please keep updating! u know u u should put ths on fictionpress if u alredy havnt. u would get waaaaaaaay more views or readers or reviews. (if thats the kinda thing u would like) please dont dissapear again, or i may havta hunt u down. :)
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Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 06:15 EST
Comment/Review:
i hate u! HATEEEEEEEEEEEE
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Wynter-san [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 19:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY loved this story, one question though...your status thingy says that it is complete yet you left a cliffy...are you still writing it? b/c I hope you do...I wanna know what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 04:55 EDT
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i hate u xp
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Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 21:53 EDT
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HAVE U STOPPED UPDATING FOREVA NOW????? SNIFF WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH ALL MY FAVOUTRITE STORIES ARE STOPPED. SIGH!
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Title: THANK THE LORD!!!
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 19:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! u updated at last!!!!!!!! it was grand!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i enjoyed reading it like every other chapter of urs. i think next time u should make a reaaaaaallyyyyy looooooooooong chapter!!! phwoar that would be heaven.
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Title: THANK THE LORD!!!
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 19:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! u updated at last!!!!!!!! it was grand!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i enjoyed reading it like every other chapter of urs. i think next time u should make a reaaaaaallyyyyy looooooooooong chapter!!! phwoar that would be heaven.
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