| "Inside Out" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: nolongerfunctioning [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 13:33 EDT
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Poor Elias! Loves his Lucas...Thanks for updating!! I've been waiting ever so long. Can't wait for you to get another chapter up! :)
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 12:34 EDT
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Quality over quantity, any day! That was a really good chapter! the whole story is so..so..Dramatic! Great! Well written! Keep up the good work because you rock!
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Reviewed By: rosiel On: May 21, 2007 23:44 EDT
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don't listen to the others lucasXelias is WAY better! and update soon, kay?
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Title: WRITE MORE IT WAS REALLY GOOD
Reviewed By: ITS ME NEWDKIDT i just didn't feel like loging in On: May 17, 2007 19:11 EDT
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i think your friend is right i want sheek and lucas to be together PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP. i really don't like the mom so much and where the hell is that good for nothing father of theirs. but i so like the pairing of sheek and lucas.
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Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 14:18 EDT
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i like lucasXsheek pairing better. Nothing personal but the incest thing was kinda awkward...but nevermind that. besides, it has to end with the state Elias is in and the last thing Lucas needs is to put the spotlight back on him and his brother. It's time that the both of them were to move on. But none the less i do hope that you update soon.
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Reviewed By: rosiel On: May 10, 2007 23:50 EDT
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please go back to the lucasxelias pairing! i don't like sheek at all
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Title: Tanjobi Omedetou
Reviewed By: nolongerfunctioning [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 10:46 EDT
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thank you!!!!
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Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 15:09 EDT
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BADSHEEK. Ishoothim. Nothing personal, I just like LucasXElias better. Honest to god I can't wait until what happens, I'll probably check back for an update every fifteen minutes... but that's how obsession works X3.
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 15:11 EDT
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Duh duh duh!!! I cannot wait till the next chapter! Clearly I'll have to, so please hurry! I Absolutley love it!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 10:50 EDT
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OMGOSH whats going to happen i need to know please write more PLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE
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Reviewed By: nolongerfunctioning [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 10:54 EDT
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I can't wait to see what happens next!! Afer all, you ended the chapter at a pretty intense ponit. Way to leave us at the edge of our seats! :)
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Title: great job
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 18:45 EDT
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love how things are turning out so far in the story ^ ~ keep up the good work and update soon please
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Title: Puh...
Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 15:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear to god if Elias doesn't tell the truth about what he was doing to himself I'll kick his ass. Love it XD, Can't wait for more.
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in love with this story, I'm going to scream if there isn't an update soon XD. I love Lucas... he's so... cool. -Looks at own brother.- Puh. Anyway, great storyline, great writing style, great everything.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 17:33 EDT
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i really loved it and i can't wait til you put up mthe pics and the next chapter. i hope he remembers because i really want lucas to beat the ccrap out of those kids.
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