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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: May 29, 2009 23:09 EDT
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ooh another good chapter! i love the rukia/yamachika pair. would love to read that story!! hint hint!! wink wink!! lol. It's sad she lost his baby and hopefully, Renji will forgive her and understand, i hope he's a man about it! He should be happy for his friend and happy his friend isn't gay right? lol. looking forward to the next chatper!
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Title: LOVE LOVE LOVE
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was glued to the screen while reading this chapter. it's interesting how yumichka and rukias relationship started sounds like what someone in zarki's squad would do lol looking forward for more especially the soi toshiro fic
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Reviewed By: Joshin On: May 28, 2009 02:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far my favorite Zaraki fic, I was so happy to see an update in my email!!! Um, more, please? (And soon! I was suffering withdrawal!)
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 01:31 EDT
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I really like how you've fleshed out Ran. You've been able to wrap her ditzy persona together with her compassion and compentence. She's still impulsive but she's pragmatic. Not easy to pull off. As for Rukia. Damn what a way to start a relationship huh? It almost deserves a one-shot... almost. Now I'm waiting for the backstory on Byakuya's relationship. If only the source material was this fulfilling. *sigh* Awesome job, Noir. ;)
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Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 22:11 EST
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It was sad for Rukia and Renji, however, I wonder who it was or is that she's in love with maybe? lol. And this entire chapter I'm reading it wanting to know more, I felt like Mastumoto wanting to be greedy getting all the info that I could and it was only one chapter :( BUT! I look forward to your next and all your other side stories for all these other characters with their pairings.
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Title: Great As Allways
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 16:24 EST
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Well that was a interesting chapter. I think you just answered a bunch of questions. I am with Bastion you should really just kill off Mayuri I never liked him. I noticed that you had Ran notice her felling for Zaraki which is nice, but I don't get why she would suspect him for cheating? How far are we ahead of your other story For the Love of a Friend? Well keep up the good work and update soon. Mors'
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 00:02 EST
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Man, I feel for Rukia. I was wondering how much of the Espada fights you were going to use. However I'm surprised Byakuya is engaged. I thought he'd sit on that one longer. I like how you've had Ran come to terms with her attraction to Zaraki. It subtly shows her passion. Also, some foreshadowing from Retsu about the fate of Toshiro and Soi? Dum dum dum! Though it might not end well, I am looking forward to the push and pull that will occur with them. Another great chapter but I am counting down the chapter to when you off Mayuri. SRLY, kill the bastard.
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: LapisDreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 14:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed reading this fanfic and looking back at my words now I feel like it was a gross understandment. Please, continue with this story. I cannot wait until you have the next chapter posted. ^-^
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: pennnnnnnny On: January 26, 2009 18:45 EST
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so good!
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Title: Been Too Long
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2009 16:48 EST
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Sorry for the delayed review been away for awile. As All ways another master piece to add to the mix. It was all flawless written. To me it seemed a little more difficult to follow but that might just be me. I like to see that Yachiru and Ran have solved their differences for now. Now if only we could find what is going on with the 12th diversion captain. Will you be writing a story for Rukia/Renji/Ichigo, Or will the just be mentioned in passing? Well you keep up the great work and I be there to keep reading.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: January 04, 2009 00:33 EST
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I'm so happy that Yachiru is now friendly with Ran and I'm so curious as to find out what is going on with the crazy science dude and his hatred toward Ran and Im also curious as to know what is going on between Rukia/Renji/Ichigo so many questions and so much for you to write. lol. well, I'll be here to read. Until the next chapter.
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Title: yaaa
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 22:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaa I am so happy you updated. I like the little moment ran had with yachiru it shows a diffrent side of her. I would love to know is yumchika with rukia I gotta know. cant wait for the next chapter.
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Title: ldymoon (nsi)
Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 00:48 EDT
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you know, i wondered about her being pregnant since it appears that everyone else female is pregnant in soul society, got to be in the dang water!! lol. sad about the first lost, glad about the new addition and looking forward to the next chapter. until then! cio
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 00:20 EDT
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Intriguing. We get a little more background on Zaraki's past, most especially his history with Retsu. Now the question is who was Retsu's mysterious crush who left SS? Also, thanks for explaining how Zaraki knows about Ran, but I thought Zaraki's ability to sense these things sucked? If memory serves, he was considered the worst out of the captains in that regard. Ah well, not going to argue that, great job once again.
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Title: Very Great Work
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 00:15 EDT
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Just read the update and loved it. Very nicely written as always. I like that fact that you seem to be ending the suffering for at least a little wile. You said it is 4-5 days apart from `For the Love of a Friend' a lot must happen in that time from the clues you give us here. I think it is great how you can be updating two stories and still keep them being so good. Well i do hope you keep up the great work and update as soon as you can. ~~Mors
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