| "The Pure Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 109 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mystical-flame On: June 26, 2007 19:42 CDT
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I'll be praying for your mother. ~.^
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Reviewed By: missjay On: June 25, 2007 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This story is exelent! U really are a great and mighty author...I bow down to a true master. Please update soon : )
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 21:57 CDT
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really good please up date soon
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: June 24, 2007 17:36 CDT
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Please update ASAP. This is great. Does Koenma know anything about this demon that's after Kagome? Sesshomaru/Kagome/Kurama/Yoko is perfect.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 23:33 CDT
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I hope your mom gets better and I'm sorry I hadnt read this chappy earlier...
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Reviewed By: dark_angel_of_death9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 22:35 CDT
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love love love this story keep writing! could you have Kagome kick Yusukes ass? like real bad? please??? love jenna xoxox
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Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree that your mothers health is more important. the chapter, though short, was well written and good. i hope your mother gets better. darknessmoon
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Reviewed By: liliesformary [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the OOC abounds in this.
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Reviewed By: crystal lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 20:36 CDT
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Well written chapter. I really enjoyed reading the events that unfolded between the characters as well as Kagome's mental struggles towards her emotions. I great appreciate the fact that you took the time to update when you did not have to due to family issues. My deepest and sincere condolence towards what you're faced with and to your mother. I understand how you feel especially since I went through similar incidents with my father and grandfather. I even put off a semester to cure for my father then end up cramming 18 units during the summer just so I could graduate as I have planned. So just do what you gotta do all you can do is take it one day at a time and do put in mind of your own health as well. Faithful reader, lillie.
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Reviewed By: MarieC On: June 21, 2007 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chap. and i hope your mother will feel better after the surgery but anyway plz continue
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Reviewed By: Krytal234 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So how abt reviewing? I'm dieing to know sess/youko(I hope sess) and who is this new villain and how they are going to deal with koenma too.
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Reviewed By: no one important On: June 11, 2007 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best things i have read in a long long time i hope you continue to update
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 23:47 CDT
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Well, that was an interesting twist. And quite a startling beginning. I can't wait to find out more about her new demon stalker. I liked Hiei helping her out. And Youko managed to get out, huh? I take it he did it when he saw Kagome was injured. Um, I know about the Reikai, the Ningenkai, and the Makai, -- what's the fourth world? Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is so so so so so so so so so so so os so so goood please up date soon im dieing to here what happends next uh well read any way
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is so so so so so so so so so so so os so so goood please up date soon im dieing to here what happends next uh well read any way
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