| "Kiss Me, Stupid" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Andartha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2010 01:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*g* Perfect, spot on characterization, very imaginative AND (in consistency with the Naruto-verse) realistic and ÜberHOT!!! love-making scene. Darn...it makes me want to read and re-read all the stuff you have written...and I don't have so much time...but I WILL be back! |
Title: trala
Reviewed By: Zirra((is very lazy, and thus not logged in)) On: April 13, 2007 13:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, *purrs contentedly* I love your stories. They work so well, and the interactions always seem so natural. Another great one added to your stock. Lovely. Ja Ne, Zirra. ^..^
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Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot woot! I've heard of a great many fics (and one-shots) of Team 7 together -- but this one's the best, I think. I'm pretty much against yaoi for the fan's sake, so I was glad to see that for their first time, there was no buttsecks. It's nice how you kept this in Sakura's POV while explaining little bits about the boys' own feelings/intentions/what you wanna call it. It'd be nice to see how Sakura convinced them both to do this, something like a prologue, possibly spurred on by an Icha Icha book. Hehe, silly Kakashi, I don't see why he needs those books anyway when it's obvious any woman would wilt for him. ;) Well now, that's all, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: vampire_panodora On: April 12, 2007 14:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it, i like how you didn't make sauske all easy and melty it was amazing
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Reviewed By: joyceeee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic, as usual. Threesomes always used to squick me until I started reading your stuff. It was snarky, and funny, and hot, exactly as a SasuNaruSaku should be imo. And I loved the last line. There was one line when I think it should have been 'visible' instead of 'visibly', but it's easily overlooked.
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Reviewed By: Pokey the Great [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 23:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome! Loved it as usual :D
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Title: freggin awsome
Reviewed By: AnimeCatGirl080291 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 21:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10's all around! that was great! i cant wait to c what happens next. (lol) keep up the great work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: gossaem [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 15:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really interesting, I enjoyed it a lot. I still felt each characters personality, and was completely wraped up in the story.
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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 11:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
This was a lot of fun. I enjoy reading your PWP/Lemon scenes because they are orginal and well written and defintely don't tread the same old paths so many pieces of smut do. I really liked that you showed the insecurities in all of the parties involved and also the realities of a threesome (someone is always not getting enough attention.) The Spelling and grammar are well done, and the smut was just plain yummy. Thanks for sharing.
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