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Reviewed By: ycardaria [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2010 19:13 EST
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Though you wrote this quite some time ago, I still wanted to let you know that it was a lovely read. Something clean, and simple. Thank you. |
Reviewed By: 28dragons On: April 13, 2009 20:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved the story from both their perspectives; the only problem I had was the tense changing all the time. Otherwise, very enjoyable :)
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Title: Worthy
Reviewed By: Nebride [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 14:48 EST
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I really enjoyed this - a good take on both their personalities. Thanks for sharing. :)
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 06:41 EDT
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I've only seen the movie and this makes me want to finally get around to reading the book. It's a really nice exploration of their characters and relationship.
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 20:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hmmm i like it. bit short though, but i guess all one-shots are :P write a sequel! lol
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Reviewed By: FreeDaChicken On: November 22, 2007 19:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story; it was very well done and enjoyable. I think you kept Sophie extremely well in-character and Howl almost as well, something that can be tricky on such an introspective piece. However, you really need to have someone beta (proofread) this. While your spelling is fine, you continually switch tense (from present to past and back). This is really distracting to the reader and takes away from your style and story. Chose one tense (preferably past, that's the most common) and stick with it for the entire story. I really enjoyed reading this! FreeDaChickens
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Title: Cool.
Reviewed By: xoxBra's Unrequited Romancexox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 05:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work. Ever considered getting a ff.net account? No spelling mistakes that I could see, and the idea was original. Overall a very well deserved 9. :)
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Reviewed By: RandomReader Nell On: September 10, 2007 06:47 EDT
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Realisticly cute. I like. Now to go and read the book so I can more fully apriciate it. (I saw the movie last night.) (I think this in the 2nd maybe 3rd review in 6+ months of reading this site. Feel lucky.) ;-)
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 01:20 EDT
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I'm normally a lurker.. I hardly review, but this was so cute, I couldn't pass up the chance to praise this work. Congrats on this work.
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Reviewed By: Mel-Mel1 On: July 11, 2007 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw. I really enjoyed the angst-tinted fluff! I liked seeing the take on both sides of the relationship, and the hesitancy that is present in any new romantic commitment. The blending of book and movie confused me a bit, but it wasn't so odd as to take away from the overall prose, especially as it sort of, however unintentional, matched your style: a mix of the fable-like tone from the novel and the care-free fluff of the movie. Thank you for sharing an absolutely lovely bit of writing!
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Reviewed By: Mel-Mel1 On: July 11, 2007 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw. I really enjoyed the angst-tinted fluff! I liked seeing the take on both sides of the relationship, and the hesitancy that is present in any new romantic commitment. The blending of book and movie confused me a bit, but it wasn't so odd as to take away from the overall prose, especially as it sort of, however unintentional, matched your style: a mix of the fable-like tone from the novel and the care-free fluff of the movie. Thank you for sharing an absolutely lovely bit of writing!
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Reviewed By: shiroi-miko On: July 02, 2007 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this cute little fic, although one thing that was a bit annoying was the switching from present to past tense. Other than that I find it was beautifully written... and the part about her name being Hatter and the fact that she makes hats was funny ^^
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Reviewed By: Hopeless Romantic On: April 28, 2007 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW! That is adorable!!!! >___< LOVED IT!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rin_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 01:12 EDT
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I love this piece, even though it was short. It was a happy sigh story that also kinda made me angry and want to read more and more! X3 I love your longer fanfics, but they're all of good quality. And I love this love story because it makes me laugh and smile X3
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Reviewed By: clavira89 On: April 16, 2007 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read. And now I review: Me likes. right, seriously though, I really enjoy all of your stories. even the unfinished ones. and I think that a lot of people (me included, of course) would love to see you updates - my personal unfinished favourite is "Love Life" (hint hint) hugs and kisses and kicks in your ass, clavira
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