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| "Predator and Prey" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 21:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just realized you only had 4 reviews, and they are all from the same pair. I'm not so good at review writing, but I'm enjoying the fic very much. You are doing very well with keeping the characters 'in character' and have also done something else that is usually very difficult. . . you have inserted a young female mostly human into the manga without making her seem like a self-insertion or Mary Sue.
| Title: *bouncy, bouncy, bouncy!!!*
Reviewed By: Kita and Subu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*throws arms around Sesshy* YAY! I loved the part you added with the Chief's kid and the detectives from NY. (*Laughs* Is that a tip of the hat to our FAKE fanfiction?-S.) I have to be beta for a minute though, cause it's Berkeley Rose, not Bradley. *giggles* Sorry. I still love you. (We both do.-S.) Write some more, kay? This was really good and I can't wait until you send us more!!! Can't waitcan'twaitcantwaitcantwait- *whap* (Sorry. I liked how you reworked that little bit I gave you and expanded on it. Really nice, and I loved Leon letting himself think about feeding Ronan's tormentors to D's pets. Very well done. Hope you have some luck with the plotbunnies I threw your way. Believe me when I say I have plotbunnies to spare around here! *kicks several under the couch* And they all come from the petshop so they're a bit of a pain! Till next update.)
| Title: It's review time...
Reviewed By: Kita and Subu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cause we wuv you! *giggles* Sorry, Subu's got a cold so you get the fangirl tonight. I soo love every chapter you send me for Beta. I wish I could get inside your head so I know WHAT'S GOING ON!!!! Hey, you never told me, does Leon ever get more than a mention? (More in a seperate e-mail, Subu has a plot bunny for you. Not for the IY/YYH one but this one) Okay, so great story, blah, blah, blah... you know we love you and where's the next chappie??????? --Da Kita!!
| Title: REVIEWS, REVIEWS, REVIEWS, REVIEWS...
Reviewed By: Kita and Subu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 23:18 CDT
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I wants Candy.... *giggles* I can't believe you left that at the end! Sesshy, you is soooo evil. *hums /to the tune of 'I want candy'/ I want yaoi... Not T-chan, silly girl... Now D and Leon...? Yums. (Sorry, dear. Kita is heavily medicated right now. You should see the row of prescription bottles lined up on the dresser. As always, lovely work, and others had better start reviewing or I'll lock them in a room with the spazzo girl here! I can't wait to see where you're going with this.) WE WUUUVVVSSSS YOOOUUUUU, SESSHY!!!!! YAYS!! (*sighs* You see what I have to put up with...)
| Title: TAKE OVER THE WORLD!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kita and Subu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, I had chocolate! Want to make something of it??!! I'll sic Tetsu on you!!!! *WHAP!!* (Sorry. Send us the next chapter for betaing please so I can get the loon to settle down and do something constructive. Great work so far.
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