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Title: love the story
Reviewed By: 897547 kagome On: November 16, 2007 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story wath hapains next, cant what hapins next
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Title: love the story
Reviewed By: 78954 kagome On: November 16, 2007 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story, i reday 1 and 2 so fare of it. cant wath to reday mouer of it
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Title: Help is on the way
Reviewed By: Tink2Kagome On: November 16, 2007 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I have told my friends about this fic and we heard that you had writers block so we want to help...these are only suggestions so...well i think that Kagome should somehow fight Naraku too and get hurt, sorta. InuYasha gets worried, specially with the baby, and so on. Also Cherity wants to see more demon InuYasha, personnaly i love demon InuYasha. Kagome needs to have the kid too...i hope this sorta helped you out alittle....if you need anymore help i'll try again after the next chapter! i really love this story! you should Keep It!
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Reviewed By: jullun (inu 4ever) On: November 06, 2007 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update plz. I dare u not to. PLZ update. I luv ur story. and plz check out my stories. But anyway. update more and I'll review more. com on plz update. U R AWESOME
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Reviewed By: decemberangel16 On: October 12, 2007 17:04 CDT
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i love it, please write more when you can please.
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Title: Ahhhh!
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 22:21 CDT
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You just told one of the craziest Inuyasha fanfic writer (just because I only have one on here does NOT mean I'm not ready to put more...I just have some technical difficulties...) ANYWAY! Inuyasha and Sesshomaru fight hard against Naraku, Kagome getting freaked out at all the near deadly attacks he throws at Inuyasha. Naraku gets so injured that Hakudoshi and Kagura have to come and get him. Kagome collapses and Rin and Sesshomaru (by Rin's request) stay until she wakes up the next morning. Inuyasha stays really concerned. Lovey-Dovey...yeah...that's what I just thought of. (lol)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 07:34 CDT
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the same fate as Kohaku.... as in been control and then not.... sorry i didnt put it in lol
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to say Nyuka idea sounds good but i hate reading Kagome getting tortured.... its everywhete -_- make Kagome get kidnap but make Naraku inplant a Tainted (sp?) jewel shard in her, and make her have the same fate!!...... if any1 knows...... yea i watched ep126 not so long ago again.... i just love hearing Kagome yelling 'IM IN LOVE WITH INUYASHA!!' (english ofc) lol dont be long!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... so action begins... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 21:23 CDT
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Oooooowwwwwwwww you just said the magic word ............hehe.........I got some ideas some I realy don't want to happen and some that would be so koo..........Well the thing I don't to happen will go like this: Naraku is nearly defeted and knows that he has to retreat but not wanting to leave with his tail between his legs he snaches the pregent Kagome fling off with the entent to torture her since he can't kill inyasha Inuyasha....and then it would continue on to the torture and Inuyasha saving her..........Or a good thing Kagome could use her power of a miko mixed with a demon in to an arrow with a swirling power to destroy the demon........or to make it interesting you could make it a mix between the two.........but you realy got to stop making small chapers it realy gets my hopes up for a let down...*Sob*................Please update soon..........Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Katana_Kiba_63 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 16:08 CDT
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Mai...ara...KAMI.... you only have 1 year left of school!!!! Lucky!!! I'm still in middle school *sobs* I have tons of homework too. It's TORTURE!!!!! Nice new chapter- short sweet and to the point. You did Rin perfectly! Fluffy-sama & InuYasha sound as overly-confident and stupid as always. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 14:23 CDT
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tell us how the battle goes, sesshoumaru's reaction to the relationship and the results. was there anyone that had been interested in kagome and their reaction. kagome's parent(s), siblings, friends etc.
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Title: i love it!!
Reviewed By: ME On: September 23, 2007 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you SOOOOOO have to write more chapters.... PLEASE!! its driving me crazy not nowing whats gonna happen next.. and the chapters are so short making it even MORE fun to read.. even though i didnt think that it could get anymore fun.... hey could you send me the chapters so i know when you post news ones up!? well my e-mail is kaszacbra@hotmail.com ok... THANKS!! oh and great story by the way.. :D I LOVE IT!!! XD
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Reviewed By: josh L On: September 07, 2007 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't comment on stories unless i think they're really good, so incase u had'nt guessed i really like it so far, it's very funny and all around good. at first i wasn't able to comprehend your writng style, but it got alot better, no offense. PLEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank u 4 updating. i love this fanfic so update more would ya! ITS A AWESOME FANFIC
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