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Reviewed By: Makala On: August 26, 2007 20:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I want more more more
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this story rules ^^ please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: decemberangel16 On: August 15, 2007 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wait to read more. update soon please.
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Title: I shall give you my idea
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 15:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
No you don't your not getting writers block while I'm reading your story, by the way this chapter was short but it was ok it realy didn't give me enything I did already know and that is kind of disapointing but as long as you update I don't care how meny filler chapters you put in....hehe.....I just got an Idea since your getting writers block I'll tell you.....when they getting in the clearing Naraku could have Sesshoumaru by the throught and he throw him twards them....and they get distracted.....with this Naraku captures Kagome in his evil plan to cause more pain for Inuyasha (he wishes to minipulate the child to do his bidding when he grows kinda like Kuhaku exsept it would be more like raising to be evil)...but then he would attempt to kill Kagome afterwards....Inuyasha and the others are hot on his trail and are after him....(with stuff inbetween of course) he gets there and sees Kagome on a sacrafishal stone table as she is giving birth.............and well you could figure something to do after ya get that far....remember I only told you what I was thinking at the time because writers block has messed up allot of good stories I've read...so I don't mind if you do or don't not use my Idea it's just my way of tring to help...ya....so no excusses.......update soon......Nyuka
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great chapter updates... wonder what happens next... upadte as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chap!!! It was really good!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I LOVE YOU'R STORY!!! YOU' THE GREATEST!!!
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank u i have wwaited sooo long. well seeya when u update again. this story is good;)
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Title: NOT THE CLIFFY!
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang it why do you do that....boo hoo...the chapters seem short as they are with out the dreded cliffys...I bet your the type of person how lives to tortucher your readers with cliffies aren't you....that is so not koo...hehe.......but any way this was a good chapter....I just wish I knew what is going to happen but up date it soon so I can find out.....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 10:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your story! It only gets better with each chapter!
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Reviewed By: kawacante On: July 28, 2007 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really do love this story...it's cute ^_^. i hope u keep it up. do i get a strawberry for reviewing?
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the point of view. though i think you have written a good Kagome Hanyou thing
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Reviewed By: Vejhed On: July 28, 2007 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think its really good. Not the kind of thing i would write but fun to read no less. I like it.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great chapter update... really like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: TERRIFIC
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story and I love it. Wonderfully done. I love the way it's going. Keep up the terrific work and update soon. THANKS!
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Title: *smiles*
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 17:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is one of my favorites right now! I love it! Your should have (I know that this idea may make Inu fans upset, but...) Inuyasha get really injured in the fight and for Kagome to nurse him back to health! Naraku, of course, runs away again to regain health. :) Just an idea.
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