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Title: =9
Reviewed By: jullun On: April 14, 2007 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for the chapters. set in more and I will review more :P
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Title: ^_^ Smile!
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 14:09 CDT
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Another good chapter. I didn't say this before, but your way of writing how the characters act and how they talk is great. It'd dead on to what they would really say and act.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you rock!!! but to soothe my perverted mind can you alaborate(sp?)with how they...join...not to be blunt so thank you for another amusing chapter and please up date soon! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 13:48 CDT
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*giggles* Chp. 6 made me go *lolz* More plz...
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more more i love it!!! please up date soon!!!!! ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 11:55 CDT
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Heh, I like the concept. However, I'd like for you to elaborate more about Inuyashas emotions. If not though his point of view, then drop little remarks that can show off his emotions. I think he's in chock so far, otherwise he wouldn't be so casual about everything - and so must Kagome be. I really look forward to read the chapter when everyone gets to know that they don't acctually remember being together... Also, I wonder if they feel some kind of bond, other than Inuyasha being possessed? Well, this shiny pearl is your to polish as you wish, I'll just read and enjoy! Ganbatte ne!
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Title: =9
Reviewed By: jullun On: April 12, 2007 06:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to read more. it is sooo funny and kawaii. see ya
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Reviewed By: halfdemon_monk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 13:48 CDT
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good story plot line but hard to follow with your style of writting
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Reviewed By: rikku31 On: April 11, 2007 12:18 CDT
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Very intersting...I really injoyed it. please write more asap.
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Title: =)
Reviewed By: jullun On: April 11, 2007 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this one was really cool. hurry up with the other chapters please. I really love it. it is very funny and I would love to read the other chapters too. An with that that Miroku, Sango, Shippô, Kilala, InuYasha and Kagome act as they do in the videos is the funniest. sayonara
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Title: MORE!!!
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLZ!?!?!?!? I want more. You're good, so keep going. So good, could you make the chapters longer? I want more good stuff!!
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Reviewed By: Tweak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 15:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwww! its so Kawaii!!! cant wait to read more!!
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Reviewed By: dejaz On: April 10, 2007 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great!!! up date soon i nreally wanna read more!! ja ne!
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Title: awsome story sweet more chapters even if noone else please for me
Reviewed By: inuyasha25100 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 15:39 CDT
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even i f i am only one who reads please i really want to know what happens i will reep ur eternal soul if u dont write more well anyway plz write more
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Reviewed By: voodoobanshee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 15:39 CDT
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Can't wait to read more!!!
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