| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zvaigzduuute On: March 17, 2010 21:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so so so so sorry for what happened. I have lost many people who have been close to me, and I know how hard it must be for you! I hope you can recover and know that they are in a better place right now. I loved loved this chapter! Poor Kagome! This is so horribly sad! I loved every part of it though! I hope she makes it! You had me so worried in the middle when Kagome flatlined! I was NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoo! I hope she makes it! I have no idea what will happen when InuYasha sees her like that! She's unrecognizable, it seems better that she was really dead at least it would be better for her! But this was amazing! I hope you can recover and continue writing! And this chapter was edited just perfectly! No worries!
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Title: Ravens_Ashs
Reviewed By: Morambrday04 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2010 18:47 PDT
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I second the motion of New Fan. This has been a rough year for a lot of us. I am so sorry to hear about Neko. She will be missed greatly. I am also happy to hear that you were not injured in your break-in. My Uncle just passed away on Feb. 27th, so this year didn't start out too well for us both. On another note, your story has not suffered at all during your trying times these passed few months. I still have nail impressions in the palms of my hands from reading this entire chapter...hehehe. I think that your trials over the last few months has helped to bring out the anxiety in this story. Please update again real soon and keep up the awesome work. Just know that you are with us all in heart and in mind. My condolences to Neko's family as well. Many hugs.
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Title: Awesome Chapter
Reviewed By: Diamond Cat On: March 17, 2010 17:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, this was a great chapter and the last part had me on the edge of my seat, holy cow, hang on Kagome, hang on!!!!! I cannot wait to see what Inuyasha is going to do to Kouga when he gets his hands on him, I. Cannot. Wait. My condolences also on the loss of your friend, may she rest in peace.
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Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2010 17:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holly Mother of God!! I just got goosebumps running all over my body and a slight chill made me get a blanket just so that I could wrap it around myself!! I have no words to describe how this chapter made me experience all sorts of emotions and pulled at all the strings in my heart! But what I can tell you is that this has been one of the best cliffhangers in the history of fanfiction I have ever read!! Welcome back! I amso very sorry to read about what happened at your house; we live in violent times and sadly this kind of things are becoming more and more common. I was robbed at gun point by someone who followed me in a car, I was getting out of my car when I saw this dark figure approaching me very fast, so I ran back and locked the door. Needles to say that didn't stop him and he pointed the gun at me and told me to open the door. I was so terrified I couldn't move, so he grabbed the butt of the gun and broke the window. I began to scream and he reached over and took my purse; then took off to the waiting car and speed off. I was so traumatized, it took weeks before I could get back inside of my car, and any time someone approached me I was jumpy and scared. So in a way I know how scary that must have been, specially because it was in your own home. I hope a bit of peace will find it's way to you and give you the relief that you so much need! I am also very sorry to hear about your beta Neko. It is true that we didn't know her but we appreciated her work and know that she will be missed as your collaborator. My deepest sympathies to you and to her family. +++***+++*** I just wanted to let you know we are thinking of you and that you will be in out thoughts; I hope that things will get a bit better and that you will find solace in the fact that at least whoever that thought about entering your house, will think twice before they do something like that again!! Take care and know you are loved! Sincerely, Midnight Cat
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Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2010 16:38 PDT
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Worth the wait. Wow.
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Title: I am sorry
Reviewed By: New Fan On: March 17, 2010 16:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I want to say that I am sorry that this early in the year has been so sad and overwheleming for you. My condolence goes out to you and your beta's family for their lost. Even though this has been a rough few months, your writing has not suffered at all. I hope that you can find some meaning and closure to this first quarter of the year and I hope that the rest of the year will be a better one. Update when ever you feel better.
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2010 14:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bloody hell. That was so intense that when I finished reading it, I didn't realize I had my nose right up to my laptop. Wow, I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you! This chapter was probably the light of my shitty spring break.
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Reviewed By: Inukag_4lyfe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2010 14:04 PDT
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OMG!!! this chapter just made my heart drop to my toes...i was on the verge of tears just now. is everything going to get better for Kagome and Inuyasha. i dont know who to feel bad for the most kagome or her family
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: anonymoss On: March 17, 2010 13:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! thank you so much for updating despite the terrible things that have happened to you this year. I hope that you continue to have faith and the strength to carry on.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2010 12:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once you cut back to the Higurashi house, I knew Kagome wasn't dead because Inuyasha was still alive, but it's also exceedingly obvious that Inuyasha holding on is the only thing tethering Kagome to this world. I do believe Mrs. Higurashi, because Kagome could have had some kind of out of body experience or something...or Mrs. H. is just losing it, but either way... KAGOME CAN'T DIE! I demand some sort of at least semi-happy ending after all of this turmoil! She's scarred for life...check...might not ever fully recover...check...but Inuyasha is her mate, even if she doesn't know it. He'll stay by her forever, no matter what. Kouga will wish those bullets had killed him.
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Reviewed By: vikay09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2010 11:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh crap! I hope Kagome wont die. Oh crap oh crap! This was an amazing chapter, a bit hectic reading! I had to reread it again and again and was all okay.. kagome injured.. bad koga.. shes dead? shes ALIVE. ahhhhhhhhhhh! can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: ShaelynBobaelyn On: March 16, 2010 21:44 PDT
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Please freaking update. You have more than a thousand followers who click the chapters and see the same last chapter with nothing new under it. I've been faithfuly checking every second day for over a month! Please either update or tell me that it's over!
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Reviewed By: DESPERATE On: March 14, 2010 12:20 PDT
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PLZ UPDATE
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Reviewed By: Lonley Girl On: March 06, 2010 17:40 PST
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I hope you haven't given up on this because this is wonderful
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 15:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO KAGOME!! Please update!! this is great.
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