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Reviewed By: WendyZ On: February 04, 2010 12:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: Snoopygirl21 On: February 04, 2010 09:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Meghanita On: February 04, 2010 07:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I was so surprised by InuYasha's reaction! At first when he would not stop looking for her, ah that was so sweet! And then he stopped, which kind of dissapointed me! But you had such a realistic approach towards it! A phone dying, that is so common, it happens all the time! I was kind of sad how he wasn't doing anything. But it made so much more sense, than have him crying over her, or ripping things apart. That is so cliche, and the way you approach it is so much better. It's more realistic and believable. And they way you work in a lot of things blends in well, and sounds so true! I cannot wait until I read some more! Your story is purely wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Morgan_kitty On: February 03, 2010 16:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING!
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Reviewed By: norwegianwooood On: February 03, 2010 10:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAHH!! I almost can't take all the angst in this story, but it's good, it's sooo goooood! I can only imagine the pain and guilt Inuyasha will go through and I have no idea what's going to happen to Kagome, and Kikyou's not even here yet to make Inuyasha more angsty and to make Kagome doubt herself! I mean, Kouga will die (right?? PLEASE KILL THAT EVIL, EVIL MAN!! Even if I do like him very much in the anime/manga, but not here!) and then Kikyou's just going to mess everything up again!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT!! You know, it's stories like yours that are just fantastic and deserve to be read and loved by everyone because of the character and relationship development, so the readers really appreciate everything Inuyasha and Kagome goes through in the end. This couple goes through SO MUCH SHIT all the time even when they're so obviously meant to be together. Please update soon, I'm dying to read the next chapter. I swear, sometimes I wish I never started this story until it is completed because I have to wait for updates!! It's almost unbearable! YOU'RE FANTASTIC! PLEASE KEEP IT UP!! YOU'RE MAKING ME SPEAK IN CAPS AND MULTIPLE EXCLAMATION POINTS!!!!1 Thank you for writing this amazing story!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ruchi-san On: February 02, 2010 18:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Adon On: February 02, 2010 17:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot stop crying! This is so so sad! I cna't believe what is happening! How can it happen to them! I cannot stand the wait! Please tell me what happens!
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Reviewed By: Austenfan On: February 02, 2010 14:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE MOST EPIC THING EVER WRITTEN! PERIOD!
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Title: So worried
Reviewed By: BJAG On: February 02, 2010 14:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so sad! Poor InuYasha, he can't even help Kagome now because he is in so much pain! Maybe somehow this will help him tell where she is! And poor Kagome she can't even defend hereself! I hope you update soon! I cannot wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Assan On: February 02, 2010 14:05 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What an intense chapter! I love the way you put your characters! Instead of being preoccupied with all the drama at hand they have human feelings too! And human dillemas like your phone dying! PLease update soon!
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Reviewed By: vintageazalea On: February 02, 2010 05:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only read up to this chapter so far, but oh my goodness, let me tell you, I'm SO glad you built up their characters, backgrounds, and attitudes to such a point that when they finally met, it was absolutely explosive. Talk about fireworks! And I'm all for anger and arguing, because that's how they really are, and I honestly do think they turn each other on by making the other livid. In other words, I ENJOYED READING THIS so very much. You write very, very well, and I can't wait to read the rest of this story. THANK YOU for building up the tension and (not-yet) romance and not bringing them together justlikethat, like too many fanfics do. All your readers will definitely appreciate the buildup and the love story. I can't wait to read! You're fantastic!! p.s. - I loved the chapter when Kagome and Sango were singing along to Alanis. Jagged Little Pill is the ultimate breakup album, you feel so invigorated afterwards.
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Reviewed By: Edwardsgirl On: February 02, 2010 05:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished reading this! OMG I did not expect this to happen. It is so sad that Kagome and InuYasha must suffer like that! I even felt sad for Yuka to die! Please update soon, I really want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Kori_chan On: February 02, 2010 05:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story made me cry and laugh, and sob again! This chapter just made me sob so hard, I can't believe what's happening! I hope they get better soon! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Dexter90 On: February 01, 2010 16:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a wonderful and delightful, and slightly twisted. I enjoyed reading this so much, I think I will go reread it again! I hope I will read something new soon!
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Devilishdream On: February 01, 2010 12:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter.. it left me so thirsty for more!!!! crazy cliffhanger!! cant wait for another update!! your amazing!
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