| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Broken Miko On: July 07, 2011 08:35 PDT
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You and your cliffhangers!!!! Amazing! |
Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2011 08:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Close but no cigar. Why do you keep doing this to us. If we werent addicts and this wasnt our drug we would be elsewhere you know. how you abuse your power. with that said of course it was an excellent chapter. not what i expected but better. UPDATE SOON! OR ELSE.... |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2011 07:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phew, okay, I'm glad the encounter with Kikyou happened that way, that Inuyasha had no wavering feelings and Kikyou didn't even really try, she just told him the truth and hopefully he'll help her out financially to disappear so Onigumo doesn't kill her. Man, Kouga is seriously screwed up in the head. I love the interaction with Inuyasha and Souta, and how even though Inuyasha didn't admit it Souta knows he and Kagome are mates anyway from experiencing that same kind of bond for himself. I'm also glad that Kagome's memories seem to be coming back. Even if the actual memories themselves are slow going and fleeting, her feelings are coming back, she knows she knows him. I was half expecting her to suddenly remove her hospital gown herself and stand before him naked, allowing him to dress her. Hell, maybe that would have happened before all hell broke loose. What happened? Are those goons that busted into her room bad guys, or are they Inuyasha's good guys there to protect Kagome because some goon broke into the hospital elsewhere? At least Inuyasha is right there and able to protect Kagome. I was fearful for a second that something bad would happen to her while he was down talking to Kikyou, which would have of course made it seem as if Kikyou had done that on purpose and have Inuyasha hating her all over again even if it was just a coincidence because somebody had seen him leave and decided to make their move at that time. Well, whatever happens next, it's bound to be epic, so I'm super looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2011 20:13 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh poor Inu!!! It is horrible she doesn't remember him but he has to understand that she is human. I love this story so much!! I can't wait to read what happens to them. Great work!! I hope u will update soon. |
Title: He Belongs to Me
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2011 17:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for the next Chapter... but meanwhile, you should all read "He Belongs to Me". A wonderful book I must say. I could not stop reading. Can't wait for the sequel! |
Title: O.O
Reviewed By: pnut-budder On: April 22, 2011 18:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yessssss! I love this story with all my heart |
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 (nsi) On: April 14, 2011 18:32 PDT
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Wha~ Can't wait to read more! And can't WAIT to get through "He Belongs To Me" !!! I hope I bought it in the right format... !!! |
Reviewed By: Ravens_ashs On: April 13, 2011 16:42 PDT
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OMG...I'm sooooo happy that she is awake again. I cringed everytime she would say Kouga's name;-s...Poor Inuyasha;-(...He so needs to get over himself and tell her about them being mates. I'm sure everything will fall right back into place if she knew they had that connection. I can't wait for the next chapter...hehehe. Keep up the great work and update soon;-). Also, I'd like to congratulate you on your book. I can't wait to read it. Please, please, please put up a new chapter here soon. Many hugs;-)... |
Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2011 10:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah my heart is breaking for them! Inuyasha needs to talk to her and explain the mate thing. I bet that will jump start her memory. Awesome update, but please make her remember Inuyasha soon! My heart can't bear it! |
Title: YESS!!
Reviewed By: Lokoramen On: April 12, 2011 19:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your stories, and i love you, and I'll tell you why : when you go a billion years w/o updating, you don't just type something up half-assed just so you don't get flamed for not updating, you still make the effort to actually write something good. that's why I'm always willing to wait for your updates, they never disappoint. |
Reviewed By: Lover's Angel On: April 12, 2011 19:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, the agony of multiple cliffhangers!! I hope you update soon. I love your writing. |
Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2011 18:45 PDT
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Thank you for updating.... I love this story and everytime I get a notification from mediaminer I hope it is this story. Poor Inu... I hope she remembers him soon more than just instinctually. I can't wait to get your book and read it also. |
Title: Love it
Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2011 16:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
So of course you knw i wsas stalking my email hoping to see an update because i just missd this story too much. as much as i dont want it to end i think i need it to en simply because i need to stop stalking you...its not healthy well at least so they tell me. overall the chapter was excellent. I like the fact that its not simple lol and that they still have some work to do. work after all is what makes a relationship. neways im extremely happy about the update and if we can get another like soon then hey im down with that. congrats on the book and of course im getting a copy...um can i get my copy signed? lol keep up the awesome work. :) |
Reviewed By: nikki_nightmare On: April 12, 2011 13:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is it weird that i get more excited about your updates than, well, pretty much anything? my jaw always drops whenever i see your updates :D i really hope Kagome gets her memory back and her and inu have a lovely happily ever after (with lemons of course). 90 days is so soon, and i dont think i have the patience for a chapter every week haha jk :) i appreciate everything that you've done with this story and i'll save every cent i hsve for your book! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2011 13:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update! I wasn't sure if you were really going to go for the 'lost memory' angle or not with your teaser from the last chapter, but I like how you're doing it, that there is something deep down inside of her that sort of remembers him, at least enough to the point that she's realized she should remember him. I also like that the doctors said they don't expect the memory loss to be permanent, so there's plenty of hope for a full recovery. Souta should have told Inuyasha how Kagome had started asking if he was her boyfriend or husband, and that she started freaking out from the thought of having forgotten her husband, that would have probably made him feel better. Although, from the way you ended this chapter, and the title for the next chapter to come, I'm getting the feeling that all will be revealed before too much longer. Still, I guess the story isn't that close to finished yet. If you're planning on wrapping it up in about 90 days, and plan on updating once a week, then that'd be approximately 12 more chapters, give or take. However many more chapters you stick in this thing, I will be sitting on pins and needles in anticipation for the next one, as I am now. Really looking forward to seeing what happens next! |
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