| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 17:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! First of all, congratulations on getting a *real* book published. But onto this wonderful little fanfic of yours...I'm so glad that Kagome is healing so fast, and the little hand-squeezes...I do hope she remembers everything when she wakes up. It would suck for Inuyasha if she had no memory of him reading to her, talking about them being mates, etc. I'm really, really glad you worked that last scene the way you did. I don't want anything else bad to happen to Kagome! Yay for Inuyasha and 'Bitch' knowing that something wasn't right, and now security will be pumped up, so that's good. I kind of feel sorry for Kikyou, so I'm hoping she actually does get to talk to Inuyasha at some point, at least just to explain herself, so he can let a painful chapter of his past go, but I'm not worried about any old feelings of love coming back to screw with his relationship with Kagome. Kagome is his mate, and this is a universe of one-and-only's in the mate department. He knows and will continue to know that Kagome is his no matter what Kikyou does or doesn't try to do. I also hope Hakkaku and Ayame come out unscathed in the end. No matter what hands they had in Kagome's earlier suffering, they saved Kagome's life in this instance. I'm really looking forward to seeing if Kagome can breathe on her own, and if she's going to be opening her eyes in the near future. Keep up the good work!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 15:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dudeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!! first and foremost congrats!!!!! i will def read ur story bc u r just an awesome author!!!!! next,i was thinking about this fanfic a few days ago and i was wishing id get an update and then u updated and this update was worth the wait. gosh that was an excellent chapter. update soooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 14:26 PDT
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This is an awesome story. The number of your reviews prove that. I hope that Kouga gets his, that Inuyasha gets revenge, and that Ayame and Hakkaku come out unscathed. I am worried for them. I am worried that Kagome will be permanently and terribly disfigured. A bad guy got onto the floor! Unbelievable! I'm so glad that Inuyasha knew what was going on. I'm surprised that no one said anything to Inuyasha about his supposed absence. I could have missed the explanation. I'll go back and check. Anywho, thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: Lovers Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2010 11:11 PDT
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Congratulations!!!!! And great chapter!! I'm so excited to see what happens next and to read that book of yours, which I am sure will be dazzling.
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2010 00:56 PDT
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OMG... I love reading this story but it is so sad to read what kags and inu are going through now. I can't wait till inu gets to take out his rage on kouga. But I absolutely loved what inu said to kags. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2010 00:55 PDT
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OMG... I love reading this story but it is so sad to read what kags and inu are going through now. I can't wait till inu gets to take out his rage on kouga. But I absolutely loved what inu said to kags. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more.
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Title: I was behind but now I'm caught up, so please may I have some more *big sparkle urchin eyes*
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2010 04:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh the drama and the chair throwing and the room recking tantrums. I was happy with who came to the rescue, it was nice to see someone else kicking ass for a change. I'm hoping things will work out for everyone and that you know who gets his can o' beating until he dies soon. Not to mention the others waiting patiently for this thing with the dirty wolf to be over so THEY can reek they're own havoc. Dang this story is just so freaking addicting.
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2010 11:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fucking Koga! ~_~ Kagome.....
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Reviewed By: Scriptix (nsi) On: June 07, 2010 23:03 PDT
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You made me cry AGAIN! Agh. The scene with Inuyasha at her bedside...you deserve an award for all the crying and eyerubbing you're wringing out of me. :p
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Reviewed By: Scriptix (nsi) On: June 07, 2010 23:03 PDT
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You made me cry AGAIN! Agh. The scene with Inuyasha at her bedside...you deserve an award for all the crying and eyerubbing you're wringing out of me. :p
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Reviewed By: Sternenstaub [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2010 04:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok - you've got me hooked. Normally I don't review, because as a non-native speaker with limited practice I find it hard to describe what I feel about a story and put it into English. But this will be one of a very few exceptions. I like the whole story. - the story line is unique. Your timing regarding the events and building up of tension and relaxation is subtle. The creativity for new ideas is awesome. As an Inuyasha fan for about 5 years I've read a lot of them (even I'm a huge Sess/Kag fan). Every time I think I've got the hints to imagine a possible twist of fate, you turn the other side. So every time you update is like getting a lucky or surprise bag for me and I like to confess: I'm addicted to your fabulous story! So keep on writing - don't you think you should alter your profession into author - and I can start waiting for my next lucky day with a lucky bag. P.S. sorry for all errors in spelling and grammar!
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Reviewed By: AnotherSongstress On: May 25, 2010 21:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is an absolutely amazing story, even at the worst parts I want to keep reading. You are without a doubt one of the best writers on this site. I can't wait for your next chapter, thank you.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2010 23:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was a wicked chapter...... I caint wait to see wat u come up with in ur next chapter.so Kouga next mated Ayame that's a twist in the story, bt nw I want to see Kagome regain conciensness and remember wat yash told like it was a dream bt she knows its true.... and oh man when yash gets his hands on Kouga I hope he kills him with a maticulous slowness and calmness that it puts a chill down the readers and yash's back
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2010 20:52 PDT
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UPDATE SOON PLEASE! this is such an amazing story. i cant wait to fins out about kagome! i hope shes ok keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2010 18:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I'd like to apologize for not reviewing sooner. I've been lax in reviewing lately, and I'm trying to make up for it. I am still with you, though. Second of all, please accept my heartfelt condolences for the loss of your wonderful Neko. My thoughts and prayers go out to all of her family and friends. Now, on to the review. What a heartbreaking chapter. InuYasha's pleas broke my heart. I know that Kagome will survive this. I only hope that their relationship will, as well. They're both going to have a long, hard road to recovery. I can't begin to fathom that journey, at all. I'm also wondering what will happen to Hakkaku and Ayame. Will they come out of this unscathed? It seems that Hakkaku may have some feelings for the she wolf. I wonder if she will eventually develop some for him in return. I think I'd like to see that. I'm sure there's also gonna be one hell of a battle when dog meets wolf. I shudder to think that it. I know you can't divulge, but I still like to "think out loud." LOL Bottom line, it was an excellent update. I'm anxiously awaiting the next!
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