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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2010 23:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was a wicked chapter...... I caint wait to see wat u come up with in ur next chapter.so Kouga next mated Ayame that's a twist in the story, bt nw I want to see Kagome regain conciensness and remember wat yash told like it was a dream bt she knows its true.... and oh man when yash gets his hands on Kouga I hope he kills him with a maticulous slowness and calmness that it puts a chill down the readers and yash's back
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2010 20:52 PDT
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UPDATE SOON PLEASE! this is such an amazing story. i cant wait to fins out about kagome! i hope shes ok keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2010 18:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I'd like to apologize for not reviewing sooner. I've been lax in reviewing lately, and I'm trying to make up for it. I am still with you, though. Second of all, please accept my heartfelt condolences for the loss of your wonderful Neko. My thoughts and prayers go out to all of her family and friends. Now, on to the review. What a heartbreaking chapter. InuYasha's pleas broke my heart. I know that Kagome will survive this. I only hope that their relationship will, as well. They're both going to have a long, hard road to recovery. I can't begin to fathom that journey, at all. I'm also wondering what will happen to Hakkaku and Ayame. Will they come out of this unscathed? It seems that Hakkaku may have some feelings for the she wolf. I wonder if she will eventually develop some for him in return. I think I'd like to see that. I'm sure there's also gonna be one hell of a battle when dog meets wolf. I shudder to think that it. I know you can't divulge, but I still like to "think out loud." LOL Bottom line, it was an excellent update. I'm anxiously awaiting the next!
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Reviewed By: nikki_nightmare On: May 23, 2010 09:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh... emmm... geee... i love the update sooo much. i checked mediaminer everyday since the last update waiting for this chapter :) i hope a new beta comes thats just as good as the old one *may she rest in peace* i cant wait for the fight between Inu and Koga. and i hope Kagome gets better :) best wishes
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 22, 2010 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Ayame. Is she and Kogua really mates??!! Poor Inuyasha. Its so sad to see him so torned. Will Kagome survive the surgery. Will the Inu brother get to Hakkaku and Ayamae before Kogua? Will Sango and Miroku be written in future chapters? If Kagome survive, will she remember Inuyasha? Update this awesome story soon!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2010 21:40 PDT
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Even though, I hate what was done with Kagome, I think I know where this is going and I love it! Can't wait to see the next couple of chapters. Loved the whole cat/dog thing with Nola and the Takashi brothers as well as the part where Sesshoumaru asks Inuyasha if Inu is trying to commit suicide. That whole part was great. Lots of angst and suspense. Great story. I just wish that Kagome hadn't had to suffer through all of that. :-( 'Til the next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2010 21:39 PDT
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Even though, I hate what was done with Kagome, I think I know where this is going and I love it! Can't wait to see the next couple of chapters. Loved the whole cat/dog thing with Nola and the Takashi brothers as well as the part where Sesshoumaru asks Inuyasha if Inu is trying to commit suicide. That whole part was great. Lots of angst and suspense. Great story. I just wish that Kagome hadn't had to suffer through all of that. :-( 'Til the next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2010 08:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very powerful chapter. At times very difficult and emotional, but breath-taking none the less. The emotions on Inuyasha were so strong that I had to fight to not let it affect me the way it did. To think that you can see your loved one at the threshold between life and death and in the condition in which Kagome is at,is something I don't think I could ever handle. It was really painful to see that Inuyasha blames himself for this atrocity, and at the same time is heart breaking. Physically this has been devastating for Kagome and everyone else, but I wonder what the psychological toll will be on all... *** Once again, a wonderful chapter! I look forward with anticipation to you next update. Hugs: MidCat
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: akdreamer38 On: May 21, 2010 01:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely Awesome!! Can't wait for the nexted chapter....Thank you!!! An absolute joy to read.
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Title: Ravens_Ashs
Reviewed By: Morambrday04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 22:49 PDT
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OMG...I was crying and sniveling over what InuYasha was feeling on the way to the hospital and elating when he jumped on all the nurses. I'm happy that Miroku was back and helped them by giving them information. I agree with LouLou, it was great stuff about buying the hospital and firing the nurse. I've felt like that a few times myself...hehehe. I know Kagome makes a full recovery and InuYashs is going to take down Kouga, maybe with a little help from Sesshy;)... hehehe. Keep up the great work and I hope you are able to give us an update here soon.
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 21:51 PDT
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Wow! Lots of emotion that nearly has your gut wrenching in sadness. I can only hope that things will be improving for your cast of characters in your next installment (with the exception of Kouga of course). I think we all want to see Inuyasha take down Kouga now. I do want to mention that in Japan health care is socialized. So there would have been no one asking for health insurance or if someone could pay for the surgeries. Remember that the US is one of the only industrialized nations in the world that does not offer health coverage to all of its citizens. My brother lives in Japan and sings praises of their nationalized medicine.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 18:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update. Powerful update. I'm sure Kagome will survive the surgeries, 'cause otherwise that would be a gods awful way to end the story, since if she dies, Inuyasha dies too. Of course, not sure if this version of Sesshoumaru has a nifty little sword back at home somewhere or not. But however you have Kagome survive all this, just so long as she survives, I'll be happy. I wonder if she heard Inuyasha while he was at her bed side. I wonder if Kouga was also watching the news! Oh man...you've got me on pins and needles here!
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Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 17:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!!! Great Update!!!!!! I enjoyed it. Cant wait till the next one :)
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 16:28 PDT
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 15:41 PDT
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GREAT chapter. I haven't reviewed ANYTHING in a while, but this chapter was terrific. Inuyasha's hurt was almost painful to read. I just hope that Kagome can fight her wasy back to him. That's a TALL order, though. And as for Kouga, I sincerely hope that Inuyasha will be the one to dispatch him, if not Kagome herself. This joker has got to die. What a waste of oxygen.....
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