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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 15:30 PDT
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Jou, Anzu, Yugi all in a bed together. and the first thing Jou does is check for cloths. so funny, and sleep talking Yugi. well Jou got his job back, and Seto will never be without an assistant. so next chapter soon please.
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Title: yo yo yo
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 16:54 PDT
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How about we call it even? I didn't even have time to review your last chapter, and you just reviewed mine, so consider this my obligation owed to you. XD Absolutely fantastic chapter, I must admit. I love the way you opened it by Jou waking up after a drunken night out with his friends. I also loved the whole "ice-cream winter tradition on the beach" scene. Its the small ideas that count and I think you really hit the nail on the head with them! In other news, I bought a really awesome Revlon eye-shadow yesterday for $5 down from $30. Totally irrelevant but I'm stoked, lol. As for my writings, DO NOT FEAR!! They are in the works. I just need to figure out what I'm going to do with this next chapter XD. I have many ideas in mind but I need to decide which one to use. So anyway, happy writings and as per usual I look forward to more!! JG-chan ~~~
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 09:35 PDT
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Good chapter. I'm glad Jou finally swallowed his pride and asked. Yay for Anzu getting them together. This is really wonderful.
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: July 23, 2007 11:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww, crap! I wanna find out what happends next!!! I can never predict whats going to happen in your stories. You seem to stray away from the norm and portray these unique and unexpected, but pleasently so, situatins where the most fitting, though still surprizing, out-come comes to light! You've made a fan outta me lol I cant wait for the next chapter! ;p
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Reviewed By: discordlives [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 01:56 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was really good. I like the emotion in it.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 18:37 PDT
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XD Touche, I yield. I admit, I'm very nerdy, and it's not just becuz of the fanfiction or the anime card games. I quoted Newton's 1st natural law during the 2nd Pirates of the Caribbean movie when Will Turner and Norrington were rolling along in the water wheel when my friend asked, "How can it keep on rolling?" But anyways, enough about me, back to the little plot twist! I'm glad that Niita probably won't be making any more weird appearances (keyword: probably). And I kinda like how Kaiba fired him for saying no. And in general, it's nice that you didn't have the outcome that ppl expected, if that makes sense. Well, cya!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 17:11 PDT
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Good chapter. Seto is being his usual arrogant self and never considered how Jou might feel. He just did what was best for himself. I hope they both reconsider. Good luck at school.
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 15:26 PDT
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no one on this planet likes the sun except morning people, who are the spawns of evil. Jou got fired, Seto handled that very very badly. oh well good luck at the uni. just don't forget your story.
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: July 15, 2007 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im blown away! I was not expectiong Kaiba to make a move, I was plesently surprized! XD Nitta is a goobe and can only imagine what she'll do should/when Kaiba fires her. Awsome job, im totally looking forward to the next installment, ja! ;p
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Title: wheeeee!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 17:08 PDT
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LOVE how you portray Niita. For an OC she's really quite a character. Reminds me of a friend of mine when she's pissed.... Anyway this chapter was absolutely magical!! Especially the ending. I totally didn't see it coming when Kaiba honed in on Jou like that. Very nice. *applauds*
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 16:49 PDT
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so cute, very cute. don't like Niita though she's annoying. can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: LOVE IT!!! GIRAFFE
Reviewed By: gabou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 21:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love it so far I really love Niita she is just soo cute I really love her And this story is one that makes you like Anzu, I think thats actually good. I love how you explained the "English soap opera."
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 16:51 PDT
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Sweet chapter. The Soap Opera part was very funny and the boys reaction to them is just like mine. How can you watch it, Anzu. She is a good friend though. Kaiba is starting to realise he likes Jounouchi more than as a friend which is good. Niita is a really weird one.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 14:33 PDT
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You REALLY know that there's something weird and slightly nerdy about you when you stick natural selection theories into YGO fanfiction... but I don't mind, cuz I'm half-nerdy myself. Anyway, I wasn't really expecting that kiss scene for a while, but it was nice. I like snowy backgrounds for romantic scenes... ^_^ Cya!
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 24, 2007 22:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thankyou! And yeah, he probibly does have super recepton being a workaholic and billionar lol Kabia on his cell while climbing a mountin, why is it that I can picture that? lol
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