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| "Arubaito" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Title: .....You There?
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: November 03, 2008 17:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! Figured I'd review to let you know your not forgotten ^^' Still here waiting though I can understand if life is busy :p Ugh, hot bath fried my brain, but regardless, my mission is to make sure you don't dorp off the face of the planet and to provide encouragemet! So get that writting muse in gear! Oi Cha! *Does fist of justice* Hehe ^^' but seriously, im still here happily waiting so please dont drop the story if your debating that. If not then i'll see you next time ne? Ja~
| Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 13:59 PDT
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Very good new chapter. No kissing scenes (which is a minor downside) but a lot of good insight into Seto and Jou's thoughts/feelings. I'll be a little sad that the story ends, but I think it has had a good run, so it's ok. Cya soon... when ever "soon" is...
| Title: =-O
Reviewed By: anubis_nli On: April 28, 2008 07:40 PDT
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ahhhhhhhhhhh.... a whole month! *dies* haha Great update, I enjoyed every minute. Thanks! Take care! - Anubis
| Title: Yo
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 20:04 PDT
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Heya ^^ amazing, dynamic and fully realistic chapter as always. Your work just seems to get better and better! Somehow Kaiba and Jou's situation seems similar to mine at the moment... being that they are apart from each other with 'time to think'. Ugh, there is nothing worse, let me tell you. Anyway before I go off on a tangent let me say that I am both saddened and excited about seeing the conclusion to this story!! I shall reply to your email again and hopefully get off my butt and get some writing done as well!! Love W. xx
| Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 00:36 PDT
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Great chapter. Kaiba having wet dreams about Jou is funny. I'm glad he made plans and told Jou he liked him. The ball is in his court now and he has to decide Their not-relationship is pretty nice leaves them both confused. I hope they can clear this up. I'm glad you updated I kept thinking about the story.
| Title: =-o
Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 19:12 PDT
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How have I not reviewed this yet!? I could have sworn I did... no matter, here I am to review away! I LOVE this story. I think that the plot is fantastic, the characters are believable and the concept is great. I like your use of imagery and vocabulary as well. I long for an update! I caught up to the chapters about a month ago and oh man do I want a new chapter! But don't rush, take your time ^_^ just letting you know that I am really looking forward to getting that notification that this story has been updated! Thanks for writing and take care!
| Title: :D
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 04, 2008 19:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH! You updated!!! :D Once again im left in suspence, very sorry I havent reviewed, getting college crap ready and my poor car has decided to go to poo,(is now fixed...for the moment...)A little hetic for me right now but im sure we all have our days ne? I am very happy to have gotten to read the new chapter and was most plesently overjoyed! XD Heres hoping for new chapters ;p
| Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 15:26 PST
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Well, better late than never, but Merry belated Christmas. The new kiss scene was very good, I liked it alot. Hah, Jou thinks weird things when he's drunk... I also read your side story about the haunted house; I liked that as well. It's nice to have you back!
| Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 03:27 PST
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Finally, the long awaited update. I am so glad you updated. I love this story and won't forget it easily. I hope they get their chance at togetherness soon without distactions.
| Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 15:55 PST
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whoa an update and a good one. i love how the story is progressing. not really fast and to really slow. your story is more like an acutally realshonship then some others that i've read. and it has Jou being drunk. another kiss, and Niitas' own brand of behavior.can't wait for the next one.
| Title: Yey!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 15:29 PST
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OK, so before I review this once-again brilliant chapter, I am going to lecture you!! HELL HATH NO FURY LIKE A WOMAN SCORNED, ARISU!!!!! Um... sorry. I don't really even know what that means, but to ME it means you suck for not emailing me, coming on MSN anymore OR updating your awesome fic!!! *hyperventilates* Now that that's out of the way... XD I LOVED this chapter. I LOVE the references to Jou shoving a finger up his nose to draw attention, I LOVED the rabid shounen-ai kissing scene... it was hot. Oh so hot. And a lot of things in this chapter made me laugh out loud and make passers-by at work stare at me oddly. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue with this!! Btw, I'm on a roll with my Kaiba x OC fic that you researched a title for me for XD I'd love for you to read it some time! It's not finished yet, though. Your story has inspired me with my own ^_^ I'd love for you to email me some time, cause I'm not sure if you still use the email address that's still in my contacts anymore... I miss talking to you!!! T_T Anyways, all my love, take care, hope all is well with your studies etc. etc. etc. ... and love ya!! Ja!! *huggles*
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 10:12 PST
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Guess I haven't reviewed in a while. I love this story, but I want to read more of it. Why haven't you updated since september? Anyway, the story is great, especially the slow progression in Joey and Seto's relationship (hell, those two would take a long time to develop any sort of feelings for each other, let alone admit such feelings to each other). So, it's a great story. Now if if only you could update faster, lol. Okay okay, update soon, alright? I gotta get going, ja ne.
| Title: Ahhhhh!!!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: December 06, 2007 19:03 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a new chapter...right???? Im not sure, I just moved to Oklahoma and am on a very hecktic scedual, I cant even tell my head from my ass right now @-@ anywho if it is Yaaaay!!!! If its not, please update b/c I miss your story ^^' Sorry to be so brief but at least im dedicated ne? Ever so busy, wish I wasent ans Merry Christmas incase im not able to wish it to you for some unknown reason lol
| Reviewed By: cinque [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 02:09 PDT
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this was really, really good. You HAVE to continue soon. Can´t wait for more.
| Reviewed By: Lasae On: September 05, 2007 14:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
He was staring in determination in the opposite direction however, so much so that Ryou, who he hadn't realized was in his line of spaced out sight, got rather flustered, and said hesitantly; "Is there something on my face?" It's sentences like that that make this such an entertaining story to read. Also; he characters are wonderfully well-written, it has atmosphere and great pace. I love the premise and this is probably the first I've read that manages it so well. I'm very much looking forward to Jou's reaction to the mess Kaiba's office must be in. ^^ Good luck with the next chapter!
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