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Title: snowecat (not signed in)
Reviewed By: snowecat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 17:19 PDT
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Hope you decide to come back, you're one of my favorite writers. You are never less than amazing in your work and this story is no exception. Wonder why Vegeta is dying, could he be having a reaction to the poison or something?
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Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 21:57 PDT
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update soon, please. i'm anxious to read more.
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Title: I love it!!!
Reviewed By: jaz021 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 00:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories!!! I just can stop reading them.... But I have to say that this one touched my heart!!!! Please don't let Vegeta die!!!!!!!!!! Well please don't take long to update your story!! See you in the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 18:13 PDT
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very very good chapter! i can't believe vegeta is DYING! NOOO!!! Bulma will heal him wont she?!
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOO!
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 20:55 PDT
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OMG! This is so bad! I leave for boot camp in four days and now I have to wonder about what is going to happen the whole time!!! Nooo...well the good thing is, is that once I get out there should be a couple chapters out by then, lol. Good chapter btw. Oh I read the mating chapter, and I just wanted to let you know that there are actually quite a few grammatical errors, so you might want to go over it again! But other than that, sooooo awesome!!!
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 02:30 PDT
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Oh, please dont make it one of thoes sad stories where one of them die, or if you do, at least make a sequal. But you cant kill Vegeta of.. Thatøs just... erm... mean. Yeah. mean.- Love the story. Update soon! :)
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Title: what?!
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 17:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry. something is clearly wrong with my eyes. I thought I just read that Vegeta was dying. How did this happen?!!!!!! well I mean besides the obvious. Bulma had better hurry the hell up and save him! update soon!! ~Aaralyn~
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: keleosnoonna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 04:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat? he's dying?? noooo, poor veggie! this adds just more drama to the story! i love the way their relationship is developing! maybe veggie's condition will help them sorting out their feelings? i hope so! keep up the good work, you're amazing!
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Title: ch4
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 02:04 PDT
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Vegeta's dying? my gosh, Paragus seems to have secured a sadistic end to Vegeta, I hope Bulma will be able to cure him, although she seems to be pushed for time. If only Vegeta said something earlier, but true to form he waits until the last minute, when he is near death before admitting to a weakness, that he might be suffering.
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Title: ch3 Mating
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 15:48 PDT
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It's interesting the way Bulma thinks she can use Vegeta as a means to exorcise the Demons of her past. But I wonder if he is a way for her to be cleansed of her past, he is the one which provided her with the opportunity to speak after being unspoken for so long, maybe he will provide her with the opportunity to heal after being broken for so long. Woh, when Bulma unshackles Vegeta it is almost as if she really is unleashing a dangerous, wild animal, I can really feel the suspense and tension in this bit. Wondering what will happen next, especially this bit: "As soon as the first is free, she hesitates." I wonder what is happening on Vegetesei, what of Raaditz and Bardock? And what will happen now that Vegeta is no longer chained, he did give his word, but then again he is in a desperate situation.
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Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 13:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another absolutely excellent chapter! I do hope you dont kill him off though.
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 13:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn that was just fantastic writting!!! I anna be you when i grow up! *sniker*
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 09:07 PDT
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I simply love all your stories, you're a very talented writer, indeed. :) I'm lookinh very much forward to the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 14:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing. i love this series.
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Reviewed By: lovesreina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 23:59 PDT
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I'm really enjoying this story! Update soon, it's great. :D
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