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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 22:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loving this new relationship of theirs.
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 19:57 PDT
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I love this chapter!!! you still have me as hooked as ever onto your stories! i can't wait to see what happens next! ur the best! keep up the great work and update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: bax0wee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 16:15 PDT
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wow wow wow wow wow. this chapter was soo .. no words to describe. HONESTLY. i don't know how to describe it. the interaction between b/v and how you wrote the mating scene was so beautiful that it made my stomach literally like flipped. lol seriously it was one of the best parts in all of your stories, right up there next to the lemons in surviving together and unwanted. really nice ! plz keep writing and update soon !
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: luvyoubraandgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 10:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good! U updated! can u update again...? i mean really really soon? please? i really like this fic!
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Reviewed By: Katrina_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 10:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well all I can say to chapter 3 is whoa....keeping writing...
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Title: breathless
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 10:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter left me breathless. It was amazing~!! I have a feeling that Bulma won't be leaving her bedroom for a while ;). Can't wait until the next update ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 08:58 PDT
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Still here, still reading, still loving it. Looking veryu mnuch forward to the next chapter!!! Update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 19:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent writting.
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Reviewed By: Sulawesi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 18:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaaa!! I love it. This is probably one of the best lemons I have read on here. Good job. Keep it coming. (no pun intended)
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Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 17:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another very excellent chapter! I love how this one went, very very good. :D
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 19:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you decided to make a squeal! Poor Vegeta! Will he ever regain his strength, and what about Raddiz? Will you somehow involve Goku in the story somehow? And will Bulma and Vegeta ever finally get together? So many questions! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: kagomegirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 18:20 PDT
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when are you going to continue your story. ive been waitin for you to continue.
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Reviewed By: kagomegirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 15:43 PDT
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this is really good. i just cant wait to see what will become of vegeta and bulma. i really ish you would write another chapter
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Title: Gohans_Onna
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 15:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! I was randomly searching for a story, and I happened upon the first story of this series, and I remembered reading it a while ago. I was so happy to see it finished, and a sequel being written as well! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! This is so great, I haven't read a good, enthralling story in so long!
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Title: starbrella
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 18:21 PDT
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great job with this chapter! it took a while to update this fic but its worth the wait. I hope you can update sooner! and keep up the great work! i can't wait until the next chapter is posted now that vegeta and bulma finally meets again.
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