| "Unbroken" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Title: loves it!!!!!
Reviewed By: tinkerbearz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for writing the sequel, i knew you werent going to leave us hanging, i absolutely love the story. will bulma have to buy him??? i hope the next chapter answers that. i cant wait till you post the next chapter. you are the best anime writer out there. take your time writing next chapter, we can wait. ive waited for 2 years, and thank you for continuing the story
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Title: loves it!!!!!
Reviewed By: tinkerbearz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for writing the sequel, i knew you werent going to leave us hanging, i absolutely love the story. will bulma have to buy him??? i hope the next chapter answers that. i cant wait till you post the next chapter. you are the best anime writer out there. take your time writing next chapter, we can wait. ive waited for 2 years, and thank you for continuing the story
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Title: YAY !
Reviewed By: bax0wee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 02:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter is starting out sooooo well !! i love the concept of vegeta being sold to the slave market.. it's quite ironic :] aha and if bulma were to buy vegeta then im sure this plot shall be VERY interesting! im very glad you've decided to write a sequel, please update soon :D i loved your stories ever since i first found it on ff.net and until now i'm still very glad youre back ! keep up the good work :D
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Reviewed By: ZOLA22 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 09:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading the end of Unspoken I had my fingers crossed for a sequel. I knew it could'nt end that way. The sequel has a great start. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Title: oh god yes!!!
Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 18:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
k, let this know how I adore you!!!! Update soon please!!!!
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Reviewed By: hinagiku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 15:04 PDT
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a sequerel, I'm so happy! And quite a cool beginning , too. Of course she will buy him, but won't that be quite risky? People might find out her whereabouts... Haha, Bulmas friends will look quite strange when she brings the beaten Saiyajin in, I wonder wether Vegeta will be happy to see here.
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Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 00:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an excellent beginning! I am very very excited to see what happens next. :)
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Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 21:34 PDT
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That was the worst place you possibly could have left it...She has to buy him. because they were destined for each other. I can't believe how quickly you came out with the sequel. I am frantically awaiting the next chapter. ~Aaralyn~
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Title: luvyoubraandgoten
Reviewed By: luvyoubraandgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 20:35 PDT
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ooooo! u did the squeal already? this is very gd so far! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 17:51 PDT
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yeeehaaa. you're back! Awesome. Love the story, already got me hooked. :) update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Izandria Johnson [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 17:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made my really bad weekend into something great! I love, Unspoken and just by this chapter I know I'm going to love Unbroken too. So Vegeta didn't win? Well that's quite sad, but still really interesting. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 15:53 PDT
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OMG! I'm so happy that you posted this up! Its already a great beginning and i'm already hooked on it...so please update soon!!!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: delirious_fate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 15:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as always, purely unabridged awesomeness... you never fail to utterly blow my mind.
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Title: Finally!!!
Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 14:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!!! You're back! I was hoping this fic was not going to be left tantalizingly unfinished. I can't wait for the next chapter, please update quickly!
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