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Title: *sob*
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 00:16 CDT
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Five days...sniff.....Five long days...sniff....What is going to happen to them??.....What about the profacy??.....I sorry if you buisy and its hard for you to up date but...but....I love your fic's to much....*waaaaaaaaaaa*....Must read more....*sob*...O sob...O cry ....O Kagome....O Sesshoumaru.....O..........O mareo....he better stay away....grawl*......I think I wining to much....and sobbing to much...and sighing to much...probably because I need to read more....Or maybe I need to read less??...Its like a drug....lol...Ok try to up date soon.................................Your fan, Nyuka XP
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Title: Catching Up - Ch 16
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 20:29 CDT
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Yes, the world stops when the computer ain't working! I just finished Ch 16..sad, sweet, intriguing! Poor Sanyu! And of course Lord Toyoharu for losing so much! What is Mareo up to? It's obvious he's liking Kagome, but no way is Sesshy letting her go! But one never knows, huh? I love when you include the Japanese lyrics. I've got songs like Every Heart & Dearest, and they are much better in Japanese than the English translations. I like trying to follow along with the lyrics so please continue to include these! :D
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Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope they figure out how to mate soon. This story has intriqued me from the start. I'm so glad thatthey are both showing emotional attachment to each other...I hope no one causes that to fade and they can manage to only strngthen and grow more in love with the ability to satisfy that love. I really got involved with this story as if I was the magician that was making them grow instead of being only a bystander of your beautiful imagery and words that seem as if you must have known them and their love.
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 08:59 CDT
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Oh no, a snooping Mareo, thstt can't be good. I hope he doesn't try to break up Sesshoumaru, and Kagome by sayint 'The only reason for Lord Sesshoumaru wanted to mate you, was because of some Prophecy to increase his power.' Because if Kagome hears that, it will be like her whole world will crumble. And for your question, I read you song lyrics at the bottom in english, after I download the song and listen to the beat, but on some of them I can't do it, but I do it on most of them. That was a great chapter, and I can't wait on 17^_^!!! Update soon:D
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 02:28 CDT
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i got to admit usually when reading a fic i just glance iver the songs but for some reason i have been reading urs, they just attract my eyes. i think becuase they just look so beautiful the words when in japanese and i want to understnad so i read the english. the chapter was nice and laughed at mareo getting a headache from the girls taliking. lol
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Title: weeeeeeeeeeeee for ch. 16
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Three chears for being Lazy.....lol....I read them when you write them even though I have know idea what they are saying....sigh...I think I would be so koo if you had some kind of link to the song or wrote a site that viewers could find the song so they could lisson to while they are reading.... : ). Also I do like knowing what I'm reading means so that is defently a positive....................................And well I hope that you already wrote chapter seventeen because this story is to good to stop reading and well when their Isn't a chapter to read I'm kinda forced to stop reading sob*........Also what is up with that guy esdroping on a couple of little girls.....a new low...lol....I'm senseing as sence of jelousy.....lol......another love triangle.......which reminds me I might have read it but for got....but what happen to Koga, you'd think with Inuyasha out of the way he would have snached up Kagome in an instance....ok I shall read on.....I feel like this is some kind of addiction....noooooooooooooooooooooooooo...NOT another Anime/manga/fanfic addiction to meny.....lol ok you write as much as you can as fast as you can and get Chapter seventeen posted.
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Title: sigh
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 22:16 CDT
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It's only been six days since you last posted but I'm starting to feel the need to read more of you fic and yet it is not writen...sigh.....and to think you wont be back untill July....sigh* you probably wont even get this comment untill you get back that is truly sad.....O-well I guess nothing can be done about that though....so have fun while the summer lasts. : )
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Title: Thank you so much
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about you friends.....It realy does stink....if they are always there and then they are gone...sigh....O but I loved this chapter I can feal my heart singing....or something because I love this fic ya got to keep writing... :)......Also because you going away untill July you have to up date five chapters...mahahahahahahah....JK Have Fun when your gone and get those creative juices flowing for when you get back I'll be check my e-mails for new chapter on your Fic. :).........so Have fun and up date when you can because I love this fic.........................................................P.S. Thank you for updateing I was get scared that you weren't going to finish this story......please don't leave me hanging aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....o ya no preasure... :) Your fan. Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 09:50 CDT
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another sweet chapter to read and lots to make the heart go aweeeeeeeeeeee and gush. the kitsune sanyu sounded cute too and as for the other Taiyoukai Toyoharu when he scolded sess about kags, not to be mating her for just gaining more power as well as sess answering back, i liked that part quite well, the story is certainly interwoving well especially with a jealous mareo adding to plot. cool... ps i thought my spam fliter letters where funny to type for this review - FLUF LOL when i saw it.
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 23:18 CDT
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hush it up! never, ever will there be a sucky chapter from you! maybe an occasional typo, but don't we all do that?! ;D You cannot be a slave to your fic - as long as you do not abandon us, go at the pace that works well for you! I knew Sesshy would turn into a super sleuth once Kags was up, up & away! Good to see his emotional range increase - a little green is good for his complexion! ;D Also good to see Rin accepted by other youkai...I always thought she needed a BFF! Jaken is quite the cheeky little imp..he too need an attitude adjustment from his usual doom & gloom. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm enjoying how this story is going, the pace is nice and detail in it good, makes it very enjoyable to read. also the ocs sound good too.
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Title: Nyuka
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yessssssssssssssssssssss finaly my mind was going to explode...lol......I know what your going through though with school and stuff the last week is always the worrest...sigh....well I was pacing back and for waiting for my little brother to get off so I could check if you updated.....sigh insted of do the mountain of homework and studing I need to do....sigh....well Im the biggest stollar and I would father read fan fic instead of study...*laugh nurvacly*.... ok im starting to babbal Im so glad that you updated but I need more...lol....AAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i need to read...lol...please update soooooooooooooon I realy need to see if Sesshoumaru goes crazy and makes him self bold.....(a bold Sesshoumaru now that would be a sight...lol).....up date soon please and thank you :)
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 20:33 CDT
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Omg that is the second time that happened to me..I wrote over 2 paragraphs for a reveiw and it is gone..I am sorry I wrote more in that comment but it didnt show up..sorry I am so sorry.. I just cant remember what I wrote but i will write more on your next update promise^_^
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 20:29 CDT
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Yay, you have updated. Lol, I knew Sesshoumaru was gonna drive himself crazy trying to figure out who's in that embrodry
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hehehe! sesshy's gettin jealous!! you are soo cool!!! this story rocks my socks!! up date soon!! lemons soon?
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