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| "Aromatherapy" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: older man?
Reviewed By: Meph On: July 01, 2009 02:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was under the impression that Zexion was around 17 or so when he died and that Demyx was more of a college age, from the research I'd been doing x_x and the impressions of the attitudes and personalities.. hmm... we know he's the youngest of the research team by a good number of years
| Title: Ooooooo . . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
If you can, I'd beg you to repost this, as it came out as one giant hunk of text, with no separations between the paragraphs--and that's the only thing working against you here. But other than that, this was seriously well written, and I loved all the background rational--it's sort of funny because I came to the same conclusions of why they all act the way they do. As for the list of aromas . . . I'd love to see it. When I write, I like including all 5 senses when I can, and it'd be helpful in figuring out tastes/smells for characters. Fear not, I will credit you in my fictions if I use any of the combos, or any parts. And the characterizations for Dem and Zexy . . . . man that was just so nice. I hope to see more from you!
| Reviewed By: rukia_kishiim [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
ah ha~ this was really awesome :D i love incense and smells and perfume and flowers and stuff like that, so if you still have that list of smell-combos-stuff, i'd love to see it please :D ~k.kondha (k.kondha@yahoo.com)
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