| "To be, or not to be... In love." Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 25, 2007 01:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your sory, very creative! I feel bad for kakashi's hands though lol Cant wait for the next chapter, keep it up! ;p
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 18:07 EDT
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Oh my god... I really can't wait for the next chapter to find out more about Sasuke..... converse but not really my kind of shoes.... either way can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Calathiel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 17:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaw Sasuke's cute like that! terribly OOC but I like it anyway ^^ Can't wait untill your next update! I wanna know what happened to Itachi!
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Reviewed By: Mr Uzumaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 10:16 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY??? I loved the fluffy stuff. This is still good but dang, talk about rough transistion. I hope the Itachi chapter is good too though. I'm glad though that Naruto finally got to have some fun time with Sasuke. Heh heh heh. I wonder what u are planning for naruto's past besides the basics. I hope you continue the good job, whether it be fluffy or not. Boo hoo. oh well. You are doing a great job anyway
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 04:39 EDT
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That was a good chapter and a great way to end it. I understand about the converse. They can go with anything. I had a friend who wore there converse to their prom and at their graduation. What makes it strange? She was a girl. But hey, she loves them and they are pretty cool.
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Reviewed By: rayangel911 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 01:06 EDT
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was soooooooooooooooooooo goood well just wanted to say that was one of the best stories i've ever read!! so KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Great work!!^^
Reviewed By: Yuna-chan On: June 11, 2007 13:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really good...write somemore and update soon...and um yeah..long live NARUSASU!!!Keep SasUKE as the uke lol... and who is Sasuke girlfriend[that mentioned earlier] anyway???
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Title: Mr. Uzumaki
Reviewed By: Narutoking On: June 09, 2007 12:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I keep finding myself falling in love again with this fic each time i read it, i love it with sasuke as the uke, it is a refreshing change with all the fics with him as an overbearing seme. The pairing of shikamaru/neji is a good idea as well
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Antipathy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 04:25 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so I finally got an account on here and this fic is my first review(with an account) YAY us! but Its like 4am so this might be useless. ANYWAYS! I went Awe quite a few times in this chapter. It was cute. I like how you do Naruto's POV some people cant do it very well but I think you nail it! I saw in your AN in the beinging you were thinking of putting Gaara with Shino. Please no(I mean if you want to go ahead but Shino is strange and I think he is asexual with bugs *shivers* and Im like Gaara's biggest fangirl in the world... soo yeahhh) I think Gaara is adorable with Lee(A lot of people dont like that and I tell them to read Diplomatic Relations by Maldoror. It will convert most anyone to Gaa/Lee) So yeah thats my random sugesstion. Moving on. If you put in any yuri who would it be?*ponders* Im interested in whats happening with the play. I love your Shika/Neji thing its cute Neji is Seme isnt he?(if his is I like how he is Seme in life and uke in the play). Sasuke is acting like a girl but I can see why because they are still trying to figure it all out. I Hope to read more soon. Thanks. Bye.
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Title: after reading ch 3
Reviewed By: depressedchildren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 17:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally can see this naruto as seme now, at least with this sasuke. it's really good and i can't wait till you update, well actually i can but you know what i meant. anways good job and keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: depressedchildren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed this fanfiction very much, and I'm not sure if it's your personal oppinion on Karin but I agree with sasuke and naruto, 'casue she does dress a litle... she's not hot or cool. Um... as for naruto as seme I can understand why you put him as it and why you're sick of susnaru, but I was surprised. To me it seems like naruto is still trying to figure his feelings out so i dunno it's your story make it however you want, i was just surprised from how it had been written, though i can see why you made him seme... Great job, love it!
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Reviewed By: Magda On: June 06, 2007 19:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I'm not generally a fan of AU, but this story's so fun. I don't have a problem with Sasuke's personality having some different facets, because the only personality we really know about is his being a silent, rage-filled freak scene. If you want to flesh that out a bit, more power to you! I have my fingers crossed that we'll eventually see Gaaaaaraaaaa (yum....)
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 17:55 EDT
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That cool. I really like this chapter and understand why it was the way it was. They needed thime to figure things out and people tend to act a little differently when they are trying to work things out I guess. Still I really enjoyed the chapter and can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Kera On: June 06, 2007 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story it's so well written and i've never read a story where naruto and sasuke get together because of a play. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story!
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 13:58 EDT
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Love your story! Though I do find it funny how good Sasuke is at being uke....Guess i just never thought about it. Oh well! Please update soon! ^-^
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