| "To be, or not to be... In love." Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 13:25 EDT
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good chapter. yay! sasuke & naruto are starting a relationship!!! anyways, i feel really blonde for just realizing that shikamaru and neji are a couple. lol. i love that pairing, but ive only found a couple fics w/ it. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: ~Aynjal~ On: June 06, 2007 11:03 EDT
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Love the story......think you should make sasu uke then naru uke.....mix it up a bit......+ Me thinks garra/itachi is good pairing.....(just saying) write more fast!!!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 08:28 EDT
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The Chapter was HOT.......I loved it ....yay Naruto and Sasuke are going out... can;t wait....update again soon. please
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Reviewed By: Kenmaru Itoshii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 16:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing style; how the characters explain themselves, it adds to the story, but when they get off track and 'they' correct themselves...it seems a little odd to me...and as a personal opinion….Also I think Sasuke should stay the uke.....how you've set him up as a stoic block to the world, but Naruto turns him into a crying mess....(it be cool if you could make it so Naru turns out to be the uke in the real relationship, because the Play would give them the chance to take/relinquish control to the other...) (Finally I'd like to propose the thoughts of having Gaara appear….he could easily be a foreign exchange student… maybe he longs for Naru or Sasu?.....just an idea….(I like Gaara….just don't let him actually win one of their hearts…) thanks for your time, Kyon (NONE of this is meant to offend you....)
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Reviewed By: hatochan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 22:55 EDT
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omg...that was soooooooo excellent!!! it's sweet and funny ( so freakin' funny) and everyone is still so in character even though it's AU. and you've given me a new favorite pairing, neji and shikamaru. that was so HOT! wonderful work:)
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Reviewed By: otakufairy On: May 29, 2007 20:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was really good. I liked the creativity and the way you made there personalities, especially kakashi, that made me laugh. the little parallels with the story were nice too, like the way kakashi was late, and the accidental kiss. SasuNaru is one of my fav pairings of all time and I usually don't like NaruSasu (which is odd because one of the best fics I've read is NaruSasu(really good one where sasuke has a alternate personality called saki-chan.) anyways...no more sidetracking) but I really enjoyed this. I can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 23:47 EDT
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please update! this is such a good story!
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 19:01 EDT
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good chapter. i actually think naruto as seme for a change would be pretty cool. yay! they kissed! lol. i cant wait to read what happens next so update soon plz.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: Kai_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 19:57 EDT
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totally love it ;D please update soon
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Title: to be in ove...or not to be
Reviewed By: dog2345 On: May 26, 2007 20:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic was so cool! plesae update soon i really want to read more! :-) and i think naruto being in charge for once is a really nice change! please update!!! sooooooooooooon!!!
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Reviewed By: STAR900 On: May 26, 2007 13:13 EDT
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I will always think that Naruto series is yaoi because of that first kiss and how SasUKE look out for Naruto first before that pink hair bitch i mean if you look at the series you will see what i see.But as an American gay in cartoon that a no no.Anywho loving the story and Naruto on top hell yes its about damn time
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Airi_Fujioka2 On: May 25, 2007 22:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! I love ur story so far! even though sasuke would never be like that, I love the way Sasuke acts!!! Keep writing!! Can't wait to read chapter 3!!!!
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Title: Rock on!!
Reviewed By: Jade Aurora On: May 22, 2007 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story(and you like reviews. hence this review because normally Im way to lazy to write one). Its definatly one of the better(way better) high school AU fics I have read so thanks! I love seme Naruto. Granted Sasuke will always be the my Favourite seme in the world but really people dont write a good seme Naruto enough... You cant spell Sasuke without 'uke' haha. I also like the little parallels between this and the manga/anime(heh acidental kiss heh). Anyways. Yes I really enjoy this story(although sometimes I got slightly confused... but thats probably because Im really tired) So I hope you keep writing it if/when you have time because I enjoy reading it.
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Reviewed By: Kyubbi Emo Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I truely say about this story.....Please continue whenever you can. I haven't read a good NaruSasu story in looooooooong time! But anyway, the story is well put and brings out much of my forgotten imagination these past days. I hope to find new chapter soon ^_~ ~Kyubbi Emo Sama~
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Reviewed By: AWESOMNESS01 On: May 21, 2007 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love the originality. i have thoroughly enjoyed this story so far and hope for more to come.
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