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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 00:05 CDT
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so, he isn't an avid fan, but he read icha icha? Huh, well that seems like a fun little tidbit. Also unlike Naruto in cannon, but he is a very different person in the story (and for that matter, seems most like post-timeskip naruto) Still, I like it, and I look foward to your next chapter. So, Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: kmt87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 06:55 CDT
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hahaha that's too funny Naruto reads icha icha tactics too!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 18:08 CDT
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That was a great chapter lol I love how Naruto got Kakashi whipped lol oh yeah I love your stories and wish you would updated more often but then again I don`t want to rush you anyways keep up te great work and please update soon again
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Reviewed By: Train1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 16:54 CDT
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Your Fic is awsome!!! I relly like to read it...The charecter of Naruto is amazing...not the standard and that makes it so great... But I have to tell you a ceartain thing: WRITE FASTER!!!!!!!!!!! I could die in the time you took for one chapter!!! Yeah you read right...pleas go on and go an FASTER!!! I guess you want to creat a fight between Hiashi and Naruto (why else shoud he investigate a Seal with could block a Sharingan/Byakugan) Yeh my english is quiet bad and I'm also quiet bad in remembering Names...but GO ON PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: archontici On: July 29, 2007 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd give it a New York Times review if I had the patience to type out such a thing. Instead, I'll give you a big hug for giving me something worth my time. More than that. Keep it up or you'll be sleeping where your house USED to be. =P
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 00:20 CDT
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I am confused did up update or did you some touch ups on other chapters oh well please update when ever you can sorry for rushing you anyways I love both of your stories so keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 01:16 CDT
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I love both of your stories was happy that you updated the other one but now I am hopping that your going to update this one soon but I have a question how are you going to make it a Naruto/Hinata pairring wen it looks like your going to be making him a Jonin while she is working on being a Genin oh well anyways please update soon or more often please I am beginning to miss your stories
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Reviewed By: Wither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great FIC,keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf31 On: July 05, 2007 16:09 CDT
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Man I love this story lol I love the way Naruto put Kakashi in his place and stoped him from being late lol ok now so I tae it your planning to make this into another Naruto and Hinata pairring oh well I would have loved to see it as either Naruto/Ino or Naruto/Tenten pairring and not another Naruto/Hinata oh and don`t get me wrong I do like tht pairring but its been done way to many times anyways I love the story and I was kinda wishing you would update your other story but if you don`t that is ok as long as you update this one lol more often ok well keep uo the good wrk and please update soon
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Reviewed By: Rokubi no Rajuu On: July 04, 2007 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What I meant was that you might what informatoin on your beta for your self and if your confused by that than I'm sorry for that and you have got better in your story,and mivicv18 is a great beta for you.
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Reviewed By: mimicv18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dont worry about it Rokubi o Rajuu i dont take offence to any thing you said. my reviews will shorten loads becouse anything i can say to help this story along will be emailed directly to crimson so dont any one go and think i have lost interest in this story becouse my reviews have shortened so much i just dont need to say so much on here any more [though i still talk alot any way lol]. and as you can see i rate this story farly i am not going to give it full marks just becouse i am beta it for crimson like with every writer out there their is always room for improvment [though i would have to say shes improved quite a bit already] good look with the next chapter crimson
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Reviewed By: Nichole On: July 02, 2007 10:15 CDT
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I believe that you did very well on the fight scene. Please get the next chapter out soon, I would love to see what rank he gets.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 18:08 CDT
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Please updte either one of your stories soon please there hasn`t been any good stories for a while and the ones that are good the authors seem to me don`t want to update them and if they do they might update them once a month or once every other month well your stories are really good I was kinda wishing they would be updated more often sorry if I am rushing you but it just seems like nobody wants to update it just seems that the only stories that actually get updated are the gay stories god I hate yaoi stories sorry so please update either story soon please
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Reviewed By: Rokubi o Rajuu On: June 25, 2007 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fight was good for a first timer in this area. The things mimicv18 said are 100 percent true, before you write anything with him( no offence Daniel Winter) but this bio word for word: my name is daniel winter. my hobbys are reading, writing [i am currently writing book which i hope to get published later] i am a genin and have been learning ninjutsu for 3 years and before that i spent 8 years leaning other martial art forms to try and find the one for me including jujitsu, akido, judo, karatie, boxing, kick boxing and a few others befor i found ninjutsu and loved it so much that i stayed with it. Update soon please. Also I Copy and Pasted his bio from his entry inforamtion.
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Reviewed By: redsnake15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
update soon
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