| "Hotel Takahashi" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 14:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished the prologue and already I can tell this'll be interesting! Nice way to start!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 13:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haven't heard from you lately Keep it up
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Title: GASP lol
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 03:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it and I abolutely love the way you wrapped this whole chapter up! Please update soon...I bet that the "strong pair of arms" is our little dog eared cutie...Maybe? No? Yes? Well I guess Ima just have to suck it up and wait for the next chapter...*sigh* Update soon please!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love your story and the constant updates. i like that Kag and Inu have already known each other before now. is inu trying to win her heart back or is he just going to break it again? anyways, update soon please. i will be still online so i will be looking for the next chapter. thanks.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 21:17 EST
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Funny chapter. I particularly liked when Kagome and Sango beat the crap out of the guys in poker. A lot of men think they're so superior when it comes to games like that, simply because of their Y chromosomes. It was really fun to see some of the little sexists get what they had coming to them, lol. I'll be looking for the next update.
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Reviewed By: me On: November 19, 2007 16:31 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. its been a while since you updated and you didn't dissapoint... well not me at least. hehehe. anyway. it was really good, and i hope you do indeed put more info on their past to tie things together, it makes it all flow better if you do. GREAT JOB!
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 21:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow long time no see well i glad u updated please write again soon
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Reviewed By: I'm Inulover1253 On: November 17, 2007 09:54 EST
Comment/Review:
You haven't written for a while it is still Good Love ur story can't wait for an update Bye
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Reviewed By: Millicent_Hellix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 07:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. so far you made the characters like how they are in the anime. Even shippo, Kinda what I thought he'd be like when hes older. please continue. but you know whats weird, how you dont mind saying fuck, but you wont say ass and use arse insted...O.o lol ohwell, not like it matters. ^_^ great story, keep writting it!
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Title: update soon please
Reviewed By: redevil820 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 22:31 EST
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i love your story so far, pleasee please update soon!! && "my sister's keeper" is a great book
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Reviewed By: CowgirlKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 03:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter, that last scene was hilarious. update soon! it's been over a month since you last updated!!!!!
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Title: Hotel Takahashi
Reviewed By: wale64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 16:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I obsolute ly love your story I am begging you to please write the next chapter as soon as possible I want to see what happens between Inuyasha and Kagome!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: CowgirlKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 02:24 EDT
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this seems like such a awesome story. i hope you update soon, i wann see if kagome goes all crazy on inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 13:28 EDT
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ACK!! Finally an update!! I've missed this story for the longest, lol. Heh, things are heating up aren't they? Kagome ever make it to the kitchen though? It'd be funny if she ended up on the other side of the hotel after that x] And all that history. Apparently Inu broke her heart, but he wants revenge for something? hmm. Can't wait to see what happens next! Great job, Update soon! Love, Ao
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 09:30 EDT
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Update soon!!!
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