| "Hotel Takahashi" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 11:07 EDT
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woot! that should say it all =)
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Title: malitiadixie
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 21:46 EDT
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Sounds good so far. I would like to see how it goes. Your writting flows very nicely. And I only found one mistake in grammar. That's a wonder in and of itself right there. (I'm kind of a spelling and grammar nazi.) I'll be waiting for the next chappie.
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Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 22:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think i would have cried if that happened. Even after she was like LOL JK! I'd still be bawlling. ne way really great start.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 15:17 EDT
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Starting off well, so I hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool... write some more
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Title: Good job
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 09:19 EDT
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It was really good, I look forward to more chapters.
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Reviewed By: @__@ On: May 26, 2007 06:48 EDT
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I really like the prologue. And I am really getting into the story...PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 03:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, how am I gonna say this? Ooh I know: This is a very good fic so go on go on. I won't tolerate it if u stop. So just u go on
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Reviewed By: Love your story! On: May 26, 2007 03:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! The prologue was a bit cliche, but I loved your first "full" chapter. The ending scene with Kagura and the whole "yanking" your chain was hilarious. The emails were done quite nicely too; I loved the brother-sister exchange we get through them, even though Kagome and Souta have not actually interacted in the story as of yet. We get a really good sense of the type of annoying, yet lovable little brother-sister relationship those two have. But, poor Kagome, it's only her first day and things are not at all what they seem to be. I wonder if she'll punch someone out, Inuyasha *hint, hint,* before the week is over. Please update as soon as you can. I'll definitely be looking forward to it.
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