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| "Hotel Takahashi" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: @__@ On: May 26, 2007 06:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like the prologue. And I am really getting into the story...PLEASE UPDATE SOON
| Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 03:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, how am I gonna say this? Ooh I know: This is a very good fic so go on go on. I won't tolerate it if u stop. So just u go on
| Reviewed By: Love your story! On: May 26, 2007 03:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! The prologue was a bit cliche, but I loved your first "full" chapter. The ending scene with Kagura and the whole "yanking" your chain was hilarious. The emails were done quite nicely too; I loved the brother-sister exchange we get through them, even though Kagome and Souta have not actually interacted in the story as of yet. We get a really good sense of the type of annoying, yet lovable little brother-sister relationship those two have. But, poor Kagome, it's only her first day and things are not at all what they seem to be. I wonder if she'll punch someone out, Inuyasha *hint, hint,* before the week is over. Please update as soon as you can. I'll definitely be looking forward to it.
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